All Comments on 'hitching a ride'

you move from sound to touch in this. Nice textures.

really jumped out at me. Love the poem and mentioned it on the new poems thread.

I'm hitting the brakes and backing up! Hop in, Seattle; I'll take you anywhere you wanna go!

Very subtle, seductive poetry.

these two lines - well - well, what flyguy said

"fingers prepare holes in fertile soil

for planting seeds of thick thumb replacements"