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hitching a ride

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by Anonymous

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by tungtied2u08/26/04

I like how

you move from sound to touch in this. Nice textures.

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by WickedEve08/26/04

1st 2 stanzas

really jumped out at me. Love the poem and mentioned it on the new poems thread.

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by flyguy6908/26/04

Screeeech!

I'm hitting the brakes and backing up! Hop in, Seattle; I'll take you anywhere you wanna go!

Very subtle, seductive poetry.

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by twelveoone08/26/04

how was the ride?

these two lines - well - well, what flyguy said
"fingers prepare holes in fertile soil
for planting seeds of thick thumb replacements"

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