All Comments on 'Demon's Sacrifice Ch. 01'

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s_pearces_pearcealmost 7 years ago
Amazing beginning

Beautifully written. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Cyrustroy59Cyrustroy59almost 7 years ago
Thank you Hentaikitten.

Thank you Hentaikitten for that well written story! Looking forward to #2

KittenKatNDogsKittenKatNDogsalmost 7 years ago
Magnifique!!

Cannot wait to read the next chapter! Please keep writing. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Am intrigued. ... .u got my attention

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Loved it, and don't act like there isn't more with the way it was left off. How, o how are you going to build this one i wonder. Eager to find out.

Really need to fix my computer, cant trust my phone with passwords but the anon tag irks me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent!

Well written and interesting. I hope you continue soon. 5 stars.

~K.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Pentagram

A pentagram has 5 points. You conjured a demon with the star of David. Oops.

90skjnk90skjnkalmost 7 years ago
Reader

I really like this story I hope you continue it

Zodia195Zodia195almost 7 years ago
Nice Start

I did see a few grammatical errors, but otherwise I was sucked in right away. I am intrigued by the story set up. I am guessing the next part is a time skip lol. Hadn't read a good demon story in awhile.

hazeleys34hazeleys34almost 7 years ago
More please

I'm hoping that you continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Ooo very nice. Can't wait for more!

jadestormbornjadestormbornalmost 7 years ago
I WANT MORE

been waiting on more since you published it. been staying up late just to see if more has been uploaded. where is the rest?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Seriously, PLEASE continue.

FaeryaWhiterunFaeryaWhiterunalmost 7 years ago
O.O

Oh... My .. I love this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More!!!

Totally hooked. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Amazing 1st chapter

Was definitely wary after reading the description of the story, however this story is going in my favorites and i will be awaiting new chapters. After that kind of twist, I'm hooked!!

hentaikittenhentaikittenalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Working on Chapter 2

Thank you for all the kind comments!

Yes, more is coming! And yes, I know I missed a few errors. I'm sorry if it shocks you that I'm not perfect. And yes, I know that a pentagram has 5 points and the star in this ritual has 6. Considering what happened to all the summoners, isn't it fairly obvious that they f***ed it up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Next chapter Soon please!!

I really enjoyed this - can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it so far

I really do hope that you continue and dont disappear 😁😁😁...

Stacie11Stacie11over 6 years ago
Looking forward to more

Little slow to get started but excellent set up. Keep up the momentum and write again soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So far so good!

Really enjoyed this!! Hope you're adding much more the story is intriguing and unique! Can't wait for the next installment!

chipmonk9chipmonk9over 6 years ago
more plzzz

I love young romance that blooms over years more plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please continue

Omg dont leave me hanging, i want to know what happens next...please dont disappear 😣😣😣😣

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