All Comments on 'The Humiliation of Hannah'

by LordDragonFire

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love the development

I love the development of the story and the video by Melody. - Assume this is to provide scope for Hannah to serve 2 masters,

I hope that there will be a chapter 2.

LordDragonFireLordDragonFireabout 6 years agoAuthor
More coming

I do plan for more in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice introduction and chapters 2+3 are identical

I like this introduction.

However I believe chapters 2+3 in your story are identical. Maybe a copy&paste mistake from editing?

Babyboo12Babyboo12about 6 years ago
Awesome story

Awesome story please continue it soon

AdriannajadeAdriannajadeabout 6 years ago
Good

I really enjoyed the story but it seems lie there was a chapter that repeated itself.

LordDragonFireLordDragonFireabout 6 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3 mistake

I've submitted an edit that fixes the chapter 2/3 duplication.

I'm glad everyone is enjoying this story so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

When should we expect another part?

justincbenedictjustincbenedictabout 6 years ago
This is fabulous...I write sometimes for $$ and this is better than

anything I've ever written...and there's no sex yet! Reminds me of Lindsay Welsh's stuff from the 1990s. And you don't point things out, you present them. Like when Melody takes the panties we know Hannah's in agony, but when Mel says "They're soaked" THAT'S when we know how turned on Hannah is.

agehanagehanabout 6 years ago
Very good

It's à very delicious story you write it very well. I wait the following part with envy

aroonkumarhotaroonkumarhotabout 6 years ago
a Great story to get excited

First thinga first, Concepts of the story is great. Ordering her to do slutty is mind-blowing, some girls likes treated to this way is awe. Characteristics of members is well detailed. Simply put it, u made me wanking at work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

Please write a part 2. I loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Good begining of a story please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
please continue

Im intrigued by office relationships stories and this one is very spicy. Please continue. Can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
? what happened ?

Sad that there is no more than 2 chapters. Those were fun to read.

Then read comments about a 3rd. Where did it go? Pulled or lost in the depths of the Lit IT? Are there more to come? Yes, please!

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