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All Comments on 'Lost in Darkness'

by Lord DragonsWing

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tolyktolykover 19 years ago
Enjoyed it bro

I thought you said you didn't do the whole poetry thing? ;) Nice work man.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
A good base,

but it could use some editing, IMO. Have you thought about breaking the lines some?

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

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