All Comments on 'Clocks and Compasses'

but feel the poem could benefit from some slimming, leaving the essence.

the idea and concept very much.

I agree a little trimming would help..and a few comma's or periods to break it into smaller thoughts.

I love the title. Perfect fit.

Dear Toward,

I loved this travelling through/back/ahead journey, a reflection definitely worth comtemplating every now and again and especially during a change of season. Don't you find autumn brings thoughts like these to mind more than any other?

Thank you so much for the walk around the block with you. You handsome-type, good-looking, smart men DO ponder the cosmic realm of beyond....its good to know <wink>.

An excellent piece, Toward.

Time's passage keeps leading you forward; clock and compass, one and the same.

Time's passage keeps leading you forward; clock and compass, one and the same.

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