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Debbie Gone Wild Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Cumbaby09/05/04

Good Start!

Nothing like a good slut story to begin with!

This whore was enjoying the steady stream of cocks using her.

Would have enjoyed a little narrative of multiple penetrations, maybe a cock in all of her holes at the same time?

Michelle

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by widespreadinterests09/05/04

Has a good premise

but ends far too abruptly. You had this set up to go on for a long time, in excruciating erotic arousing detail. And no special description of the actions or effect of the man with the huge cock, splitting her cunt open, then gagging her throat. The writing style is good, though the characters of the narrator and Debbie could be fleshed out a bit more.

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