Loving you is torture. Don't ever stop writing, please...
by
Anonymous09/09/04
Well Crafted Story
Lovely story man. Please continue the story but please do not add two guys, I think it would degrade the story you've crafted so far. Maybe have them travel in trains, planes and automoblies doing funky stuff:) u've been imagnative so far, keep up the good work!
I had to go back a re-read #1 and #2 and now number 3.... I love all your incest storeis youbadboy... your writing is superb... the characters so believable... and the way you stretch out things.... the best..... thanks..
by
Anonymous09/15/04
So belivable.....
I read the first two along time ago, and was one of the millions that spamed you to finish it. I love the way you give the char's their own personality, their own goals, and at the same time you show how they are feeling. And oh my, The scenes that you paint in my mind and in others is so vivid its like i am watching something on pay per view...but only better. Thanks alot and waiting on edge until number 4 comes out.
by
Anonymous09/22/04
Caught!
Perhaps it's time for mom and or dad to catch them at something naughty!
by
Anonymous09/28/04
Hot!
Sara is a little slut. I think Mom should catch them and should make brother fuck her..
by
Anonymous10/01/04
Awesome.
Great story, it kept me going for 3 hours...or more even haha, goes to say that I lost track of time!...I also agree that you should continue this story and maybe have something to do with them ending up at the same college. And please do not fullfill her second wish of more than one guy, that would kill the characters....anyway Great story!
Great story line, and well written. Please continue this story having them get caught by their parents, then Sara can have two real cocks, her brother and her father!
by
Anonymous10/17/04
Godlike
BEST STORY EVER. But as to a second guy killing the story, that might be true, but if it happens when she's blindfolded, and she never sees him, and he never gets involved after, that would be fine, I think.
by
Anonymous10/24/04
Great
Love this series! More!
by
Anonymous10/27/04
wow
loved it
by
Anonymous11/25/04
IT was greatt
Ur stories are good. but dont put the other guys in maybe remote toys in her around the parents at dinner. Maybe a other family member see them in a club or out. whatever u decide i am sure it will be good.
by
Anonymous01/03/05
Great job!
GARRR WAT IS THE THIRD THING!!! LIFE IS NOT WHOLE WITHOUT MY KNOWING OF THE THIRD FAVOR!!! GRR! lol You did a great job on this entire series, it was: well thought out, belivable(sorry cant spell), really hot, and above all it was better than some professional literature I've read. Once again congrats and keep writing!
PS Try to get published im sure you could.
by
Anonymous01/28/05
UNFUCKING-BELIEVABLE
I read the three parts in a row and I loved it. I find it quite frustrating that we don't know about the third condition but maybe the answer will be in the next part (I personnally hope there will be one). Just one thing is bugging me : if they are as much hooked to one another as they seem to be, I don't think they will be able to behave until they go on a vacation again (unless they go every week-end lol).
by
Anonymous04/04/05
Fatastical
Loved the story, keep up to good work. I hope you will continue the series and not really let people's suggestions the storyline too much since you are the one that came up with such a great story. I personally loved how you kept the relationship between just the two of them, their own little world with the danger of being caught, the little pieces of exhibition really enhace it. Really, a fantastic incest story, you have got the key elements down, really, keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous05/20/05
WoW
Whatever about the subject matter the shear need of these too for each other and the way that they developed naturally sexually through desire as it should be were awesome....It was such a turn on to feel a part of their awakening
Again, I love the way you stretch things out. You should continue this great series but don't let other people's suggestions influence your storyline too much. Remember, you are the author, its your story!
by
Anonymous02/22/06
So very bad
The relationship between these siblings is so... bad. Tight, together, good.
I've come to appreciate your style of writing so much that even when I see the occasional spelling or grammatical error, it's only effect is to remind me that you're not perfect, just human like the rest of us.
I think I needed to discover your work. It reminds me to feel.
Thank you youbadboy.
by
Anonymous03/23/06
excelent story
Best I ever read.Thank's Youd , go ahead
by
Anonymous04/07/06
yeah
oh my god your stories are amazing!!! seriously
by
Anonymous05/12/06
Hmm
Wow, this is definitely the best erotoica story I've read.
I liked everything about this story, cept for one thing: I may be alone on this, but personally, I dont like the whole "double team" thing. If you can make it good tho, then, by all means...
by
Anonymous12/04/06
WOW.
I am utterly speechless.
Almost in tears it was so good.
by
Anonymous12/14/06
uno-numo.......the best....
stayed up pleasantly while i read ...really kept me on the edge...like to see them and new adventures....please keep writing....your the best
by
Anonymous01/24/07
Fantastic
You really are unbelievable.
Keep writing
by
Anonymous02/19/07
Don\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t now who you are!!!
I count the seconds to read the fourth. I live thousands of miles far away from your in a middle-eastern country. Wish I could keep in touch more.
by
Anonymous03/22/07
Hot, sexy, and well written!
It's not often that I find a story that gets me really hot, and is very well written. Wow! Great job!
by
Anonymous05/27/07
makin me wet
I love it! Just the thing to take the "edge" off a lonely night. Well written fantasties like this are just DELICIOUS to take in.
I commend you on a successful venture.
by
Anonymous06/19/07
best
one of the best stories ever
by
Anonymous12/25/07
Thank you Daddy. Yes Sir. Yes Sir.
Masterful. You have a keen sense for detail and description. Not too much and not too little.
Just too much youbadboy! now you have put my .... on fire! don't know how to put it out! amazing you could make me wet so much...`
by
Anonymous01/25/08
Sara Pregnant
Loved the series and hope it continues,,, would love to see the 3rd favour being sis getting pregnant by bro,,plz dont add parents and keep this a loving and wild story between bro and sis,,, keep up the great work
Loved it all except for the daddy stuff. Just turned me off to the rest of the story. The eroticism was terrific and the romance was great... keep playing with the love aspect! It's sweet as well as hot!
I want to scream when I got to the end...I was sure she was going to tell him she might be preganant. I love your stories! I couldn't sleep so I got up, 3am, and started reading again.
I need a chapter 4 and please don't include the parents in on the sex.
I can't add any more compliments than others have already given.I loved the fact that they didn't break up, even though they had agreed to tone it down quite a bit. If the story were to continue, I would hope that they would come to the realization that they were meant for each other, and find a way to be together always. No other people. No bringing the 'rents into their bed, etc.
by
Anonymous11/17/08
Amazing story.
I just finished reading this story and I HAVE to know what happened. Did they get caught? Did they fall in love and everything work out? Amazing story. I just hope it doesnt end like the series finale of Sopranos.
by
Anonymous01/23/09
You are the master of the tease
and I love your stories. Most tales in this section are too direct or develop too fast for my taste. You have them develop slowly, giving the reader the feeling that they know what will come next, expect it though they cannot be absolutely sure.
Keep writing the best.
by
Anonymous04/07/09
And...
And three... and Three????? oooooo you ARE a tease :P Well written, really conjures the images to your brain! I just finished reading this mini series and each story brought something new and exciting! Keep up all the good work you're doing.
by
Anonymous06/14/09
best story ever!!!
wow made my pussy throb untill i was dripping wet!! best story i've read
by
Anonymous07/17/09
Nice story all around
Great lead-up to the sex scenes--not too fast, even a lot of teasing and "picking up my hand and moving it away" . Oh, how I wanted him to finger her right away, but I knew it would take awhile. Antici......pation. The slutty bar scene was so decadent--almost getting caught, while strangers watched. Glad she finally got rear-ended. Thanks for a great story.
by
Anonymous09/11/09
Would like to see them be together for good.
Though it was a hot story there was a hidden romance in there and it would be nice to see a happy ending where they stay together.
by
Anonymous09/13/09
Wow!!
Dis s better than most professional literature....u should seriously consider publishing...it made me cum 12 times before finishing all three.....thanks a lot! I think it ended quite beautifully...and adding another part might spoil such a master piece.your style of writing s d best...u have natural talent...u know yo art...keep it up!! And thanks again!
by
Anonymous01/10/10
Great Love Story
Great writing. So are so talented with your storys. Sara's car trip was so interesting. The build up between the two the teasing, the romance. It was a great story I have never read a better one than this. You should publish this in book stores. Maybe then we can find out what #3 is and what chapter 4 holds for them. Please keep writing.
by
Anonymous01/22/10
What?? Are you a pro writer??
I agree with EVERYONE above! I want a chapter 4!!!! I was up all night reading could not stop! I came so many times I was worn out! and My wife read it and jumped me like never before! I want them to keep going chapter 4, 5, 6 7 etc LOL. one can transfer colleges... you have to keep em together. Agreed with all the fucking there has to be a baby LOL...
English
More More
Keep going!!!
More Please
Please keep the pair together....without outside influences!
oh baby boo
Loving you is torture. Don't ever stop writing, please...
Well Crafted Story
Lovely story man. Please continue the story but please do not add two guys, I think it would degrade the story you've crafted so far. Maybe have them travel in trains, planes and automoblies doing funky stuff:) u've been imagnative so far, keep up the good work!
Good Stuff!!
Vivid Description and great scenarios. Keep up the good work!
Excellent as usual
Look forward to every one of youbadboy's submissions.
Maybe consider having the parents catch the bro and sis in the act.... and joining in????
Getting Sara Pregnant
Great series youbadboy would love to see in the next chapters ,maybe the impregnation of sara by her brother
All I can say is
WOW
More WOW
I had to go back a re-read #1 and #2 and now number 3.... I love all your incest storeis youbadboy... your writing is superb... the characters so believable... and the way you stretch out things.... the best..... thanks..
So belivable.....
I read the first two along time ago, and was one of the millions that spamed you to finish it. I love the way you give the char's their own personality, their own goals, and at the same time you show how they are feeling. And oh my, The scenes that you paint in my mind and in others is so vivid its like i am watching something on pay per view...but only better. Thanks alot and waiting on edge until number 4 comes out.
Caught!
Perhaps it's time for mom and or dad to catch them at something naughty!
Hot!
Sara is a little slut. I think Mom should catch them and should make brother fuck her..
Awesome.
Great story, it kept me going for 3 hours...or more even haha, goes to say that I lost track of time!...I also agree that you should continue this story and maybe have something to do with them ending up at the same college. And please do not fullfill her second wish of more than one guy, that would kill the characters....anyway Great story!
And mother and father makes it a foursome
Great story line, and well written. Please continue this story having them get caught by their parents, then Sara can have two real cocks, her brother and her father!
Godlike
BEST STORY EVER. But as to a second guy killing the story, that might be true, but if it happens when she's blindfolded, and she never sees him, and he never gets involved after, that would be fine, I think.
Great
Love this series! More!
wow
loved it
IT was greatt
Ur stories are good. but dont put the other guys in maybe remote toys in her around the parents at dinner. Maybe a other family member see them in a club or out. whatever u decide i am sure it will be good.
Great job!
GARRR WAT IS THE THIRD THING!!! LIFE IS NOT WHOLE WITHOUT MY KNOWING OF THE THIRD FAVOR!!! GRR! lol You did a great job on this entire series, it was: well thought out, belivable(sorry cant spell), really hot, and above all it was better than some professional literature I've read. Once again congrats and keep writing!
PS Try to get published im sure you could.
UNFUCKING-BELIEVABLE
I read the three parts in a row and I loved it. I find it quite frustrating that we don't know about the third condition but maybe the answer will be in the next part (I personnally hope there will be one). Just one thing is bugging me : if they are as much hooked to one another as they seem to be, I don't think they will be able to behave until they go on a vacation again (unless they go every week-end lol).
Fatastical
Loved the story, keep up to good work. I hope you will continue the series and not really let people's suggestions the storyline too much since you are the one that came up with such a great story. I personally loved how you kept the relationship between just the two of them, their own little world with the danger of being caught, the little pieces of exhibition really enhace it. Really, a fantastic incest story, you have got the key elements down, really, keep up the good work.
WoW
Whatever about the subject matter the shear need of these too for each other and the way that they developed naturally sexually through desire as it should be were awesome....It was such a turn on to feel a part of their awakening
Awesome
What a story!
Bring us a 4th!
You continue to keep us happy!
Again, I love the way you stretch things out. You should continue this great series but don't let other people's suggestions influence your storyline too much. Remember, you are the author, its your story!
So very bad
The relationship between these siblings is so... bad. Tight, together, good.
I've come to appreciate your style of writing so much that even when I see the occasional spelling or grammatical error, it's only effect is to remind me that you're not perfect, just human like the rest of us.
I think I needed to discover your work. It reminds me to feel.
Thank you youbadboy.
excelent story
Best I ever read.Thank's Youd , go ahead
yeah
oh my god your stories are amazing!!! seriously
Hmm
Wow, this is definitely the best erotoica story I've read.
I liked everything about this story, cept for one thing: I may be alone on this, but personally, I dont like the whole "double team" thing. If you can make it good tho, then, by all means...
WOW.
I am utterly speechless.
Almost in tears it was so good.
uno-numo.......the best....
stayed up pleasantly while i read ...really kept me on the edge...like to see them and new adventures....please keep writing....your the best
Fantastic
You really are unbelievable.
Keep writing
Don\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t now who you are!!!
I count the seconds to read the fourth. I live thousands of miles far away from your in a middle-eastern country. Wish I could keep in touch more.
Hot, sexy, and well written!
It's not often that I find a story that gets me really hot, and is very well written. Wow! Great job!
makin me wet
I love it! Just the thing to take the "edge" off a lonely night. Well written fantasties like this are just DELICIOUS to take in.
I commend you on a successful venture.
best
one of the best stories ever
Thank you Daddy. Yes Sir. Yes Sir.
Masterful. You have a keen sense for detail and description. Not too much and not too little.
Just too much
Just too much youbadboy! now you have put my .... on fire! don't know how to put it out! amazing you could make me wet so much...`
Sara Pregnant
Loved the series and hope it continues,,, would love to see the 3rd favour being sis getting pregnant by bro,,plz dont add parents and keep this a loving and wild story between bro and sis,,, keep up the great work
Great series
Loved it all except for the daddy stuff. Just turned me off to the rest of the story. The eroticism was terrific and the romance was great... keep playing with the love aspect! It's sweet as well as hot!
Wow! So talented
I want to scream when I got to the end...I was sure she was going to tell him she might be preganant. I love your stories! I couldn't sleep so I got up, 3am, and started reading again.
I need a chapter 4 and please don't include the parents in on the sex.
Fantastic!
I can't add any more compliments than others have already given.I loved the fact that they didn't break up, even though they had agreed to tone it down quite a bit. If the story were to continue, I would hope that they would come to the realization that they were meant for each other, and find a way to be together always. No other people. No bringing the 'rents into their bed, etc.
Amazing story.
I just finished reading this story and I HAVE to know what happened. Did they get caught? Did they fall in love and everything work out? Amazing story. I just hope it doesnt end like the series finale of Sopranos.
You are the master of the tease
and I love your stories. Most tales in this section are too direct or develop too fast for my taste. You have them develop slowly, giving the reader the feeling that they know what will come next, expect it though they cannot be absolutely sure.
Keep writing the best.
And...
And three... and Three????? oooooo you ARE a tease :P Well written, really conjures the images to your brain! I just finished reading this mini series and each story brought something new and exciting! Keep up all the good work you're doing.
best story ever!!!
wow made my pussy throb untill i was dripping wet!! best story i've read
Nice story all around
Great lead-up to the sex scenes--not too fast, even a lot of teasing and "picking up my hand and moving it away" . Oh, how I wanted him to finger her right away, but I knew it would take awhile. Antici......pation. The slutty bar scene was so decadent--almost getting caught, while strangers watched. Glad she finally got rear-ended. Thanks for a great story.
Would like to see them be together for good.
Though it was a hot story there was a hidden romance in there and it would be nice to see a happy ending where they stay together.
Wow!!
Dis s better than most professional literature....u should seriously consider publishing...it made me cum 12 times before finishing all three.....thanks a lot! I think it ended quite beautifully...and adding another part might spoil such a master piece.your style of writing s d best...u have natural talent...u know yo art...keep it up!! And thanks again!
Great Love Story
Great writing. So are so talented with your storys. Sara's car trip was so interesting. The build up between the two the teasing, the romance. It was a great story I have never read a better one than this. You should publish this in book stores. Maybe then we can find out what #3 is and what chapter 4 holds for them. Please keep writing.
What?? Are you a pro writer??
I agree with EVERYONE above! I want a chapter 4!!!! I was up all night reading could not stop! I came so many times I was worn out! and My wife read it and jumped me like never before! I want them to keep going chapter 4, 5, 6 7 etc LOL. one can transfer colleges... you have to keep em together. Agreed with all the fucking there has to be a baby LOL...
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Sara's Car Trip Ch. 03 or
More submissions by youbadboy.