Sara's Car Trip Ch. 03

marvelous.

Enjoyed your submission immensely. Especially when you got started with the butt plugs. I have a love for them myself. The only difference is...I am a guy. surprised? Thanks for a great read...I'll look forward to future submissions.

trfghytrfg

amazing story. You are a talented writer. Wouldnt like the 3 on 1 action. The bro and sis are basically to close, the way they talk to each other suggests that they are like 1 person in perfect unison. But hey who am i to dictate, eh.

Getting knocked up

Other other guy should be her father. and the third thing she wants to get pregnant by her brother. She she have his babies as many as she can young girls in heat need to be bred. often.

Glad there's not a ch. 4

Putting a threesome in this series would have completely ruined it. Glad that didn't happen.

Great Stories!

I just read through all three; they were really great! While I too am hesitant about the potential three-some or four-some I look forward to your next chapter and I am sure you will surprise us all with how you pull it off. As someone in the BDSM lifestyle I love the introduction of submission and toys into your story and I'd love to see you delve into that more. All in all I loved it, keep up the good work!

AWESOME SERIES!!!!

You, my friend, have an amazing mind and writing ability. I absolutely loved this series. I could visualize everything like I was actually there. I do hope you will add on to it. I also hope you will keep writing and adding more of these great stories.

Nice!

Nice pacing! Although other people have tried to write
About this concept, you clearly have a style I enjoy reading!


SCHUPPINZIGH

I disagree with one reader. It shouldn't be her father. Let me say first you have a true talent and the way you methodically go from romantically and emotionally erotic to certain times just a down right fuckfest was perfect. Here's where I kinda don't like where its going. You're turning the sister into a bonafide slut. Which is far from whence we came (no pun intended, lol). She went from not having sex for years, to developing this deeply passionate love affair with her brother. An affair that only involves these two. The way you we're ending this b4 she started with her list was so classy and heart felt, to me they seemed tortured lovers now. Its evident she is actually in Love with her brother now (Watching him sleep isn't only a sign of love, its that of like deep romance and the what they want speech at the end). Definitely keep the parents involved tho for that danger element of being caught. Maybe even put them back in the same house like the brother visited the sister at college or vice versa, something happened like they got caught during one of their sexual escapades since they are a lot more daring about it. and one of them got kicked out of college. The waitress seemed interesting too, maybe she can be another threat like she goes to the brother or sister's college or moves to their parents neighborhood. Great work and can't wait for the next chapter

good

But her want in a threesome was a bit of ruin of the end and I think that he should gey. Her pregnwt and they should run off together

So sexxy and hot!

This is a great series! I love it!

so sexy

and sweet at the same time. i think they should be together. how they get there is up to you the writer.

What Ever happened To Sara's Vacation????

What Ever happened To Sara's Vacation????

Left hanging again

This is an incomplete story - all that build up and no reax climax - I loved the story but feel cheated by the lack of a real ending.

Nyc

Was really nyc story until she says bout havin mulitple cocks in her and they should be together..

Good story...

but the ending is just weird and totally unnecessary.

As good as I remembered

I read Sara's Car Trip about three years ago. It was so good I had to read it again. One of the best stories on this site.

Fuuuuccckk O_O

It was so beautiful in crude, raunchy way, but you left the story on hold in the 3rd chapter. Just finish with a happy OR sad ending, please. Would've been 5 stars but I have to give this a 4 instead for the lack of an ending.

need more

You really need to continue this and let us see there relationship continue over the visits at college and home for christmas and somehow them coming together and having a family.

more!!!

you need to continue this fucking delicious story! that's all I'm saying.

This story is pure gold

One of the best stories I've ever read, you have such a talent for writing

awesome

i read all of them in like 2 hours but it sucked because i was so phycked about the ending but then you cut it short RATING:3.5 because of lack of ending

Continue

Haven't read any of the other Sara stories yet - but will, to see if they are really more of these 3. Loved the bar scene. Who of us hasn't wanted to fuck in public. My old girlfriend and I once did it in her old bench front seat car right in front of the busy motel office where we were staying.Many people walking by. Made it more of a thrill. Do hope there's more to this tale (tail).

Wow.

This... Is amazing. Erotic and beautiful..this is.... AMAZING!!!

Go no further please!

Please don't ruin a good raunchy loving tale by dragging strangers into the affair. Even the way you introduced anal wasn't too bad and I hate reading about anal in a realistic romantic story. It's like mashing a ripe banana into a glass of fine scotch whiskey. Some things, though they each have their fans, just don't belong in the same place.

The chars are now falling down a path to being porn sluts if you bring in three or more -somes into it. They deserve better than that so I'm glad it finished. Do the other stuff as a different story series if you must - it's your story after all.

I agree the parents being a danger of discovery worked just right. Also, the pregnancy angle needed exploring. All that unprotected sex and no mention of the possibility of a baby? You started nearly perfect and finished just at the edge of spoilage so I guess you wrung all you could out of this plot.

Thanks for the good read.

i love it.

i love amazing to read and imagine. but please dont bring anyone new in. its special with them, a secret, something quiet and beautiful. other people would taint it...

Sara's car trip

your stories are amazing n super hot. loved them. keep writing.

Everything was written in a very romantic and loving fashion, until that last comment about a threesome or foursome.

Strangers????

Why would you bring in stranger's after bringing them so close?

i think i speak for most when i say that introducing that last paragraph where she says she wants other men, is the only thing i dislike.

Fantastic!

Fantastic story-telling. Please don't stop or change your writing style.

so fat it was best but bringing in third person, this is going to be another brother sister lust story now on.. and that sucks . like a porn

Sorry but I don't mind three

It's okay for brother and sister to fuck but we can't have a threesome? Hopefully Sara and J open their little relationship upto others. Good story line, hope to meet Sara one day pulling a train! LOL

A great brother-sister sex story with romance and love.

Don't fuck it up by making it a threesome (unless it is with Mom, LOL). Thank you for writing this very hot story.

nice end to this series-great sex

loved the bar scene-like how they're trying to figure out the future, a little too indefinite, but you'll get them there-thanks

best story line on literotica

I don't know how many times I've read about Sara's Car Trip, but I do know it's the best story on the site.

more more more PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE

That was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT I would LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE to see more stories I DON'T WANT IT TO END!

Dont add more people to have sex with sara that would ruin the story ..what i would do is have them make a decision to go to the ssme colledge so they could be close to each other because they both now know that their maddly in love with each other and every day that they have had to spend apart has been a living hell to both of them and now they know their never going to find a love with anyone else ...have sara sitting up nights looking at her brothers picture holding a old shirt of his and crying because her heart is so heavy with love for him and after a few months of pain and not being able to focus in class she starts making bad grades so the only thing that will help her the only way she will ever get her mind and heavy heart back to the happiness she had on vacation is to be near her one and only true love and at this stage she doest care if her parents know because either they can except the love they share or they may have to accept the fact she would rather be dead than have to keep living in so much pain every day ...

"Sara's Car trip Ch. 03:" - Sara and Jason - (Sister and Brother)

A wise word to the writer: Your story ended exactly at the precise moment in time before becoming a smut, gutter-slut, deminted, deviant and perverted gluttony of porn trash!!! Even shit-fucking is not my bag, but this story had the correct seasoning of the butt plugs mentioned rarely over several days and then a brief synopsis and rendering of butt fucking--tastefully done! This story is about incest!! Personally, I do not read incest stories to get sick kicks of perversion and debauchery--I read them for the love and sensuality of connections of an incestual lover's lives of NORMALCY, except obviously for the risk and exposures of their relationship being totally and fully illegal (i.e., against the law!!). A story written as fictional and fantasy does not change the lawlessness of the incestual actions.

The bottom line is those of us that appreciate fantasy stories of mimicked real-life incest, and those of us that have experienced and still do experience real-life incest, very much appreciate stories that follow the reality of those experiences, without the pornographic titillating! In addition, incestual couples do like some forms of perversion and deviancy--BUT they do not want to read about the sexual merits muddied up and slopped in with real or fantasy incest related loves and lives; they will read those stories seperate as most all readers do.

i love this series amazing

Like someone else said

Don't add other guys to the story.. that's just disgusting, it would ruin the story and you'd lose a lot of people. Well, atleast me and the other guy, I'd drop this series in a second.

The story has been perfect. Absolutely fucking perfect. ...I agree, no more players added, no more guys. I won't read it, it will ruin it totally. ...it would be like... I can't think of the misery of disappointment it would bring... :(

Brilliant

Absolutely brilliant series.

Amazing Story

Your series has been amazing. I have been wet from the first page. I loved the innocence of this story in the beginning. The building of their desires, needs, and love for each other mixed with the reality of knowing it had to come to end and the stress the felt about it before deciding to carryout their relationship on secret rendezvous. It was incredibly hot and I can only dream of having a brother like Jason.

You can do it.

I trust you. You could make it work. There are a dozen stories to tell . Many years to cover. College, marriage, did the parents see? Dozens. Its about the skill in the telling. You can do it.

This is an amazing series. I can only echoe what I have already read. Continue their story. Did they move away - live as man & wife? After all they do have the same surname already. Did they have children? Did Mom & Dad ever discover/join their union? So many places yet to go with Jason and Sarah, but not with other people ravaging her. That would just dirty what they have that is beautiful in their own beautiful little world. You are an amazing storyteller, but don't go off on a tangient that would spoil a love story as pure as this.

anthologic !

The restaurant scene has entered History; thanks (spike)

Super hot. Thanks!

The restaurant scene was just wow, love daddy/little girl play. Though "I want to be fucked by two guys at the same time..." - that too much and not cool, I think, but maybe it's just me, so...

wow.....

I love this series.... the bar scene ...damn...parents in the bar was icing on the cake. But I gotta say the very end... the 2nd request kinda killed the mood...

Keep going

need another chapter. What was mom and dad doing in that bar? Did they see their children, will they join Sara seems to like the thought of fucking daddy

Dont stop

Please keep going. What if they changed schools to live off campus. They could pass themselves off as husband and wife what with the same last name. Conflict when they hook up with bf and gf. Maybe the other couple are also brother and sister.
Too many unresolved questions. They are at a high because of their love but at same time a low because they know the future is impossible the way they want it. Or is it ...
Really good work. Thanks for the read.