Sara's Car Trip Ch. 03

third thing she wants

need another chapter...kinda left us hanging there...what would be her third thing she wants from her brother

GREAT STORY

This series has been great, well written, with character development and a realistic plot. Please keep at it.
Thanks.

The story promised, the story DELIVERED!

I could feel every little sensation. I became completely immersed in both characters! Brilliant! I loved their risk taking, their danger, their total unbridled sex!

disapointed

I love this story. A tale of discovery, lust, and finally discovery of love. By the way, your really not supposed to wear butt plugs all the time. You know, that muscle performs a practical function also and it definitely doesn't need to be damaged. I was disapointed in her at the end. Wanting to be gangbanged. It was so out of character and really didn't fit the story and was a good way to sully the young love that they had found for each other. I think you ended the story at a good time. Right before you could have ruined it by trying to fulfill her 'wants'. You are a good writer and you wrote characters who came alive to me, which is wonderful for the reader, but you are trying to go too far.

Exciting but not the best

My twin sister and I tend to score based on story line and this was very good. In fact, everything from this author has been worth reading.
Our dad has been fucking our cunts since we were 15, almost four years. And I almost hesitate to add this because there is so much BS on the Web about a mans penis size. Take this or leave it, but Dad measures 8 1/4 " long and 7" in circumference. My sister has checked this about three times and he is always +- 1/4". That's a lot of meat and it has taken us quite a while to manage it. We have been doing anal/oral with him a few years longer than our pussies. We are now 19 and loving every minute of it. Three stars, two thumbs up.

Exciting !!!

Either a woman /girl or a baby.Move away...How about all of the above.(so to speak)

a good story gone one step too far already

why not let them figure out how they can treat each other with respect? appreciate what they have discovered and build on their desire to cherish who they are. see how they can build a life together. romance not kink
not 2 or 3 guys with sara. not how far can we push this. they have only begun and have their entire lifetimes ahead of them.
please

Great series!

I loved this set of stories, and how you extended the sexuality with romance. A little bit of proofreading necessary, but I really really liked these stories! A fourth story, maybe during the next vacation? >)

Second read on this, its been a while! Still enjoyed it pretty well... The end bit with her 'wish' of her wanting him to have him and some other guy fuck her was a turnoff though:/. Fuck that. Sharing sucks.
I think I got just as turned on reading the post of the twins below though! Whew! Daddy fucking their little pussies since they were 15, their asses since they were 12 or 13, wow! Holy crap, trying go picture squeezing that thick, long, hard cock up those tiny, tight asses! ;). Naughty naughty!!

INCEST IS BEST

GOOD READ. NOT TO ENAMORED WITH THE END THO. NOT INTERESTED IN HAVING SIS ENJOYING FUCKING WITH MULTIPLE COCKS. THE ENDING WITH SIS BEING PREGNANT WITH YOUR CHILD WOULD HAVE BEEN MUCH BETTER.

was wonderful

This WAS wonderful, until you watered it down. The butt plugs for days at a time? You can't do that without real damage. A few hours at a time, at most. And what about respect. She told him no several times. True, they ended up together but it seems like he pushed. There should have been more about their romance too, not just the sex. These are all small things, but I agree with most of the other commentors. The shareing of Sara should be repellant to him. He's fallen in love with his sister and had sex almost everyday and night for almost two weeks. But its only been two weeks and I, myself, would be very opposed to shareing my girl especially so soon. And third that is unnamed? We must suppose that it is his baby, but if they can't even be together how can they make that work? Is she going to be an unwed mother and him a very close uncle for the rest of their lives? I think you ended this up wrong. They should have been ending it with a conversation about how to make it work. To be together. They have just discovered each other and already she is telling him at the end that he is not enough for her.

You are a master with words

During the three weeks of vacation, it would seem she should be pregnant. Perhaps I missed about her being on birth control, otherwise, her cycle had to be during this time of being at the beach. I would have enjoyed more about dad and mom being in the bar and if they saw their offsprings, but didn't let on they noticed what they were doing or someone else in the bar commented about them enjoying the joining of their organs. Again, five stars.

The parents

In the last part of the story. I was hoping that you would invite the parents into their game.

Arrrgghhh

Don't leave me hanging. .... what is number 3

OMG

I so want a happy ending, but I know that can't be.

Write again

If you still write, write more on this story.

SLEEP LOSER

could not stop reading till I was all the way thru

As per the title

I think the story should have been told from Sara's POV.

Good story though.

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

PLEASE tell me she was joking about that 2nd request!!!! Sara's body belongs to only Jason. Also, WHAT was the 3rd request???!!!! You're killing me after having read all 3 parts straight through and cumming twice. Don't know when you wrote these ,but PLEASE don't leave us hanging on the 3rd request !!!!! Jason and Sara have come/cum so far ! Please tell me Sara wants to facesit him, squirt in his mouth and also give him a golden shower !

Liked the stories so far, but ...

I liked these stories very much, gave the other ones 5 stars, the whole buildup remembered me of my sis & me. But I didn't like this one.
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But there are two things that spoil this one for me:
First:
the 'daddy' thing is a turndown for me,
It's a sister & brother thing, that's kinky enough. Bringing this up looks like bringing in some artificial extra kink that the story doen't need at all.
Second:
bringing in other guys or parents in this intimate relationship is destroying it in my opinion.

Fantastic

absolutely loving this. So do they move away from home and become a couple? I hope so. not liking the thought of a threesome with other blokes though. Maybe a dildo and a vibrator all at once.
Then there is babies and a loving relationship for years to come.