All Comments on 'Sara's Car Trip Ch. 03'

Keep going!!!

Please keep the pair together....without outside influences!

Loving you is torture. Don't ever stop writing, please...

Lovely story man. Please continue the story but please do not add two guys, I think it would degrade the story you've crafted so far. Maybe have them travel in trains, planes and automoblies doing funky stuff:) u've been imagnative so far, keep up the good work!

Vivid Description and great scenarios. Keep up the good work!

Look forward to every one of youbadboy's submissions.

Maybe consider having the parents catch the bro and sis in the act.... and joining in????

Great series youbadboy would love to see in the next chapters ,maybe the impregnation of sara by her brother

WOW

I had to go back a re-read #1 and #2 and now number 3.... I love all your incest storeis youbadboy... your writing is superb... the characters so believable... and the way you stretch out things.... the best..... thanks..

I read the first two along time ago, and was one of the millions that spamed you to finish it. I love the way you give the char's their own personality, their own goals, and at the same time you show how they are feeling. And oh my, The scenes that you paint in my mind and in others is so vivid its like i am watching something on pay per view...but only better. Thanks alot and waiting on edge until number 4 comes out.

Perhaps it's time for mom and or dad to catch them at something naughty!

Sara is a little slut. I think Mom should catch them and should make brother fuck her..

Great story, it kept me going for 3 hours...or more even haha, goes to say that I lost track of time!...I also agree that you should continue this story and maybe have something to do with them ending up at the same college. And please do not fullfill her second wish of more than one guy, that would kill the characters....anyway Great story!

Great story line, and well written. Please continue this story having them get caught by their parents, then Sara can have two real cocks, her brother and her father!

BEST STORY EVER. But as to a second guy killing the story, that might be true, but if it happens when she's blindfolded, and she never sees him, and he never gets involved after, that would be fine, I think.

Love this series! More!

loved it

Ur stories are good. but dont put the other guys in maybe remote toys in her around the parents at dinner. Maybe a other family member see them in a club or out. whatever u decide i am sure it will be good.

GARRR WAT IS THE THIRD THING!!! LIFE IS NOT WHOLE WITHOUT MY KNOWING OF THE THIRD FAVOR!!! GRR! lol You did a great job on this entire series, it was: well thought out, belivable(sorry cant spell), really hot, and above all it was better than some professional literature I've read. Once again congrats and keep writing!

PS Try to get published im sure you could.

I read the three parts in a row and I loved it. I find it quite frustrating that we don't know about the third condition but maybe the answer will be in the next part (I personnally hope there will be one). Just one thing is bugging me : if they are as much hooked to one another as they seem to be, I don't think they will be able to behave until they go on a vacation again (unless they go every week-end lol).

Loved the story, keep up to good work. I hope you will continue the series and not really let people's suggestions the storyline too much since you are the one that came up with such a great story. I personally loved how you kept the relationship between just the two of them, their own little world with the danger of being caught, the little pieces of exhibition really enhace it. Really, a fantastic incest story, you have got the key elements down, really, keep up the good work.

Whatever about the subject matter the shear need of these too for each other and the way that they developed naturally sexually through desire as it should be were awesome....It was such a turn on to feel a part of their awakening

What a story!

Bring us a 4th!

Again, I love the way you stretch things out. You should continue this great series but don't let other people's suggestions influence your storyline too much. Remember, you are the author, its your story!

The relationship between these siblings is so... bad. Tight, together, good.

I've come to appreciate your style of writing so much that even when I see the occasional spelling or grammatical error, it's only effect is to remind me that you're not perfect, just human like the rest of us.

I think I needed to discover your work. It reminds me to feel.

Thank you youbadboy.

Best I ever read.Thank's Youd , go ahead

oh my god your stories are amazing!!! seriously

Wow, this is definitely the best erotoica story I've read.

I liked everything about this story, cept for one thing: I may be alone on this, but personally, I dont like the whole "double team" thing. If you can make it good tho, then, by all means...

I am utterly speechless.

Almost in tears it was so good.

stayed up pleasantly while i read ...really kept me on the edge...like to see them and new adventures....please keep writing....your the best

You really are unbelievable.

Keep writing

I count the seconds to read the fourth. I live thousands of miles far away from your in a middle-eastern country. Wish I could keep in touch more.

It's not often that I find a story that gets me really hot, and is very well written. Wow! Great job!

I love it! Just the thing to take the "edge" off a lonely night. Well written fantasties like this are just DELICIOUS to take in.

I commend you on a successful venture.

one of the best stories ever

Masterful. You have a keen sense for detail and description. Not too much and not too little.

Just too much youbadboy! now you have put my .... on fire! don't know how to put it out! amazing you could make me wet so much...`

Loved the series and hope it continues,,, would love to see the 3rd favour being sis getting pregnant by bro,,plz dont add parents and keep this a loving and wild story between bro and sis,,, keep up the great work

Loved it all except for the daddy stuff. Just turned me off to the rest of the story. The eroticism was terrific and the romance was great... keep playing with the love aspect! It's sweet as well as hot!

I want to scream when I got to the end...I was sure she was going to tell him she might be preganant. I love your stories! I couldn't sleep so I got up, 3am, and started reading again.

I need a chapter 4 and please don't include the parents in on the sex.

I can't add any more compliments than others have already given.<br><br>I loved the fact that they didn't break up, even though they had agreed to tone it down quite a bit. If the story were to continue, I would hope that they would come to the realization that they were meant for each other, and find a way to be together always. No other people. No bringing the 'rents into their bed, etc.

I just finished reading this story and I HAVE to know what happened. Did they get caught? Did they fall in love and everything work out? Amazing story. I just hope it doesnt end like the series finale of Sopranos.

and I love your stories. Most tales in this section are too direct or develop too fast for my taste. You have them develop slowly, giving the reader the feeling that they know what will come next, expect it though they cannot be absolutely sure.

Keep writing the best.

And three... and Three????? oooooo you ARE a tease :P Well written, really conjures the images to your brain! I just finished reading this mini series and each story brought something new and exciting! Keep up all the good work you're doing.

wow made my pussy throb untill i was dripping wet!! best story i've read

Great lead-up to the sex scenes--not too fast, even a lot of teasing and "picking up my hand and moving it away" . Oh, how I wanted him to finger her right away, but I knew it would take awhile. Antici......pation. The slutty bar scene was so decadent--almost getting caught, while strangers watched. Glad she finally got rear-ended. Thanks for a great story.

Though it was a hot story there was a hidden romance in there and it would be nice to see a happy ending where they stay together.

Dis s better than most professional literature....u should seriously consider publishing...it made me cum 12 times before finishing all three.....thanks a lot! I think it ended quite beautifully...and adding another part might spoil such a master piece.your style of writing s d best...u have natural talent...u know yo art...keep it up!! And thanks again!

Great writing. So are so talented with your storys. Sara's car trip was so interesting. The build up between the two the teasing, the romance. It was a great story I have never read a better one than this. You should publish this in book stores. Maybe then we can find out what #3 is and what chapter 4 holds for them. Please keep writing.

I agree with EVERYONE above! I want a chapter 4!!!! I was up all night reading could not stop! I came so many times I was worn out! and My wife read it and jumped me like never before! I want them to keep going chapter 4, 5, 6 7 etc LOL. one can transfer colleges... you have to keep em together. Agreed with all the fucking there has to be a baby LOL...

Enjoyed your submission immensely. Especially when you got started with the butt plugs. I have a love for them myself. The only difference is...I am a guy. surprised? Thanks for a great read...I'll look forward to future submissions.

amazing story. You are a talented writer. Wouldnt like the 3 on 1 action. The bro and sis are basically to close, the way they talk to each other suggests that they are like 1 person in perfect unison. But hey who am i to dictate, eh.

Other other guy should be her father. and the third thing she wants to get pregnant by her brother. She she have his babies as many as she can young girls in heat need to be bred. often.

Putting a threesome in this series would have completely ruined it. Glad that didn't happen.

I just read through all three; they were really great! While I too am hesitant about the potential three-some or four-some I look forward to your next chapter and I am sure you will surprise us all with how you pull it off. As someone in the BDSM lifestyle I love the introduction of submission and toys into your story and I'd love to see you delve into that more. All in all I loved it, keep up the good work!

You, my friend, have an amazing mind and writing ability. I absolutely loved this series. I could visualize everything like I was actually there. I do hope you will add on to it. I also hope you will keep writing and adding more of these great stories.

Nice pacing! Although other people have tried to write

About this concept, you clearly have a style I enjoy reading!

SCHUPPINZIGH

I disagree with one reader. It shouldn't be her father. Let me say first you have a true talent and the way you methodically go from romantically and emotionally erotic to certain times just a down right fuckfest was perfect. Here's where I kinda don't like where its going. You're turning the sister into a bonafide slut. Which is far from whence we came (no pun intended, lol). She went from not having sex for years, to developing this deeply passionate love affair with her brother. An affair that only involves these two. The way you we're ending this b4 she started with her list was so classy and heart felt, to me they seemed tortured lovers now. Its evident she is actually in Love with her brother now (Watching him sleep isn't only a sign of love, its that of like deep romance and the what they want speech at the end). Definitely keep the parents involved tho for that danger element of being caught. Maybe even put them back in the same house like the brother visited the sister at college or vice versa, something happened like they got caught during one of their sexual escapades since they are a lot more daring about it. and one of them got kicked out of college. The waitress seemed interesting too, maybe she can be another threat like she goes to the brother or sister's college or moves to their parents neighborhood. Great work and can't wait for the next chapter

But her want in a threesome was a bit of ruin of the end and I think that he should gey. Her pregnwt and they should run off together

This is a great series! I love it!

and sweet at the same time. i think they should be together. how they get there is up to you the writer.

What Ever happened To Sara's Vacation????

This is an incomplete story - all that build up and no reax climax - I loved the story but feel cheated by the lack of a real ending.

Was really nyc story until she says bout havin mulitple cocks in her and they should be together..

but the ending is just weird and totally unnecessary.

I read Sara's Car Trip about three years ago. It was so good I had to read it again. One of the best stories on this site.

It was so beautiful in crude, raunchy way, but you left the story on hold in the 3rd chapter. Just finish with a happy OR sad ending, please. Would've been 5 stars but I have to give this a 4 instead for the lack of an ending.

You really need to continue this and let us see there relationship continue over the visits at college and home for christmas and somehow them coming together and having a family.

you need to continue this fucking delicious story! that's all I'm saying.

One of the best stories I've ever read, you have such a talent for writing

i read all of them in like 2 hours but it sucked because i was so phycked about the ending but then you cut it short RATING:3.5 because of lack of ending

Haven't read any of the other Sara stories yet - but will, to see if they are really more of these 3. Loved the bar scene. Who of us hasn't wanted to fuck in public. My old girlfriend and I once did it in her old bench front seat car right in front of the busy motel office where we were staying.Many people walking by. Made it more of a thrill. Do hope there's more to this tale (tail).

This... Is amazing. Erotic and beautiful..this is.... AMAZING!!!

Please don't ruin a good raunchy loving tale by dragging strangers into the affair. Even the way you introduced anal wasn't too bad and I hate reading about anal in a realistic romantic story. It's like mashing a ripe banana into a glass of fine scotch whiskey. Some things, though they each have their fans, just don't belong in the same place.

The chars are now falling down a path to being porn sluts if you bring in three or more -somes into it. They deserve better than that so I'm glad it finished. Do the other stuff as a different story series if you must - it's your story after all.

I agree the parents being a danger of discovery worked just right. Also, the pregnancy angle needed exploring. All that unprotected sex and no mention of the possibility of a baby? You started nearly perfect and finished just at the edge of spoilage so I guess you wrung all you could out of this plot.

Thanks for the good read.

i love amazing to read and imagine. but please dont bring anyone new in. its special with them, a secret, something quiet and beautiful. other people would taint it...

your stories are amazing n super hot. loved them. keep writing.

Everything was written in a very romantic and loving fashion, until that last comment about a threesome or foursome.

Why would you bring in stranger's after bringing them so close?

i think i speak for most when i say that introducing that last paragraph where she says she wants other men, is the only thing i dislike.

Fantastic story-telling. Please don't stop or change your writing style.

so fat it was best but bringing in third person, this is going to be another brother sister lust story now on.. and that sucks . like a porn

It's okay for brother and sister to fuck but we can't have a threesome? Hopefully Sara and J open their little relationship upto others. Good story line, hope to meet Sara one day pulling a train! LOL

Don't fuck it up by making it a threesome (unless it is with Mom, LOL). Thank you for writing this very hot story.

loved the bar scene-like how they're trying to figure out the future, a little too indefinite, but you'll get them there-thanks

I don't know how many times I've read about Sara's Car Trip, but I do know it's the best story on the site.

That was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT I would LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE to see more stories I DON'T WANT IT TO END!

Dont add more people to have sex with sara that would ruin the story ..what i would do is have them make a decision to go to the ssme colledge so they could be close to each other because they both now know that their maddly in love with each other and every day that they have had to spend apart has been a living hell to both of them and now they know their never going to find a love with anyone else ...have sara sitting up nights looking at her brothers picture holding a old shirt of his and crying because her heart is so heavy with love for him and after a few months of pain and not being able to focus in class she starts making bad grades so the only thing that will help her the only way she will ever get her mind and heavy heart back to the happiness she had on vacation is to be near her one and only true love and at this stage she doest care if her parents know because either they can except the love they share or they may have to accept the fact she would rather be dead than have to keep living in so much pain every day ...

A wise word to the writer: Your story ended exactly at the precise moment in time before becoming a smut, gutter-slut, deminted, deviant and perverted gluttony of porn trash!!! Even shit-fucking is not my bag, but this story had the correct seasoning of the butt plugs mentioned rarely over several days and then a brief synopsis and rendering of butt fucking--tastefully done! This story is about incest!! Personally, I do not read incest stories to get sick kicks of perversion and debauchery--I read them for the love and sensuality of connections of an incestual lover's lives of NORMALCY, except obviously for the risk and exposures of their relationship being totally and fully illegal (i.e., against the law!!). A story written as fictional and fantasy does not change the lawlessness of the incestual actions.

The bottom line is those of us that appreciate fantasy stories of mimicked real-life incest, and those of us that have experienced and still do experience real-life incest, very much appreciate stories that follow the reality of those experiences, without the pornographic titillating! In addition, incestual couples do like some forms of perversion and deviancy--BUT they do not want to read about the sexual merits muddied up and slopped in with real or fantasy incest related loves and lives; they will read those stories seperate as most all readers do.

i love this series amazing

Don't add other guys to the story.. that's just disgusting, it would ruin the story and you'd lose a lot of people. Well, atleast me and the other guy, I'd drop this series in a second.

The story has been perfect. Absolutely fucking perfect. ...I agree, no more players added, no more guys. I won't read it, it will ruin it totally. ...it would be like... I can't think of the misery of disappointment it would bring... :(

Absolutely brilliant series.

Your series has been amazing. I have been wet from the first page. I loved the innocence of this story in the beginning. The building of their desires, needs, and love for each other mixed with the reality of knowing it had to come to end and the stress the felt about it before deciding to carryout their relationship on secret rendezvous. It was incredibly hot and I can only dream of having a brother like Jason.

I trust you. You could make it work. There are a dozen stories to tell . Many years to cover. College, marriage, did the parents see? Dozens. Its about the skill in the telling. You can do it.

This is an amazing series. I can only echoe what I have already read. Continue their story. Did they move away - live as man & wife? After all they do have the same surname already. Did they have children? Did Mom & Dad ever discover/join their union? So many places yet to go with Jason and Sarah, but not with other people ravaging her. That would just dirty what they have that is beautiful in their own beautiful little world. You are an amazing storyteller, but don't go off on a tangient that would spoil a love story as pure as this.

The restaurant scene has entered History; thanks (spike)

The restaurant scene was just wow, love daddy/little girl play. Though "I want to be fucked by two guys at the same time..." - that too much and not cool, I think, but maybe it's just me, so...

I love this series.... the bar scene ...damn...parents in the bar was icing on the cake. But I gotta say the very end... the 2nd request kinda killed the mood...

need another chapter. What was mom and dad doing in that bar? Did they see their children, will they join Sara seems to like the thought of fucking daddy

Please keep going. What if they changed schools to live off campus. They could pass themselves off as husband and wife what with the same last name. Conflict when they hook up with bf and gf. Maybe the other couple are also brother and sister.

Too many unresolved questions. They are at a high because of their love but at same time a low because they know the future is impossible the way they want it. Or is it ...

Really good work. Thanks for the read.