All Comments on 'The Fall Pt. 04'

I can't wait until he realizes what's happening.

Your storyline is getting hotter and well worth the wait between chapters.

this is your story.

Timeline, background, personal interaction? Not so much, yet, I keep hoping.

Out of the first four chapters in this series, this was my least favorite. Public sex in a nightclub, bar or other adult setting would be ok but not in a family restaurant. Also, I would have liked to have seen more attention paid to the mind control aspect instead of simply fucking/sucking every pussy he comes across.