by ponyfitness
All I can say is wow. I really hope you continue the story because I absolutely love it.
Gina
Wow - Great story and good character development as well. I second the previous comment; I hope to see more of this story line too.
This was hot! I think you have a great style, a combination of realistic situations and erotic fantasy. Literotica is a great place for you to flex this particular muscle of yours. Can't wait to see where this is going, especially because I'm a fitness trainer myself and think that this is is very hot and secretly what most of us fantasize. You were able to write what we dream of. Well done!