All Comments on 'The Trainer's Chronicles Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
OMG

All I can say is wow. I really hope you continue the story because I absolutely love it.

Gina

ktr30ktr30about 19 years ago
I should join a gym!

Wow - Great story and good character development as well. I second the previous comment; I hope to see more of this story line too.

AudreyHepburnAudreyHepburnover 16 years ago
Hot And Well-Written

This was hot! I think you have a great style, a combination of realistic situations and erotic fantasy. Literotica is a great place for you to flex this particular muscle of yours. Can't wait to see where this is going, especially because I'm a fitness trainer myself and think that this is is very hot and secretly what most of us fantasize. You were able to write what we dream of. Well done!

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