All Comments on 'Just A Taste'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
craving

*hopping in car.. driving to store..purchasing milkyway and its all your fault*

v~

mcfbridgemcfbridgeover 19 years ago
Very Tasty

I don't think I will ever look at caramel the same way, now if I could only get a taste of Honey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Chocolate and Eroticism

Two of a woman's favorite things in one poem.

matriarchmatriarchover 19 years ago
This is

Deeelishus. Looks even better on the screen. Well done Honey. xxxxx

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenover 19 years ago
How sweet it is!

Sticky and sweet? Yes, a wonderful combination indeed. Nice poem, Honey.

~lucky

RemecRemecover 19 years ago
<licking lips>

Mmm...I always thought there was a reason I loved Milky Way over other types of candy bars. I really liked this, esp for a first time submission (I might have punctuated differently, but that's the kind of personal thing you have to decide for yourself.) Very evocative. <g>

BelegonBelegonover 19 years ago
Isn't it wonderful...

...that sex and chocolate connection? Nice first (but better not be last) contribution. Not enough babe, gimme more. Maybe a popsicle poem next? ~~evil grin~~

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
That

... made me want to suck somebody's tongue LOL

Delicious ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Metal Note

Great poem. Making a mental note to pick up a Milky Way on the way home from work, give it to the mrs along with a link to this.

Parrothead49Parrothead49over 19 years ago
fabulous

like all your stories and thoughts, absolutely the best and what's unsaid is so erotic. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Bit-O-Honey..

Oh, to be

That candy bar

To feel your lips

againt me

You teeth

devour me...

Damn, Babe, Now you got me started. Good job Honey.

mtnman2003mtnman2003over 19 years ago
Wanting to taste

Great, soft, sensual, vivid....

I want to taste you, to share the moment.....

cheerful_deviantcheerful_deviantover 19 years ago
Sweet as Honey... er... Chocolate.

Great work babe. I'll never look at a Milky Way the same again.

cantdogcantdogover 19 years ago
Tight focus

like a William Carlos Williams. Very polished and sharp

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Mmmmmm....

Tastey poetry~ deliciously served and inticed my apetite. He he he good poem (~_*) Thanks

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Mouth Watering!

Very hot poem, though I think I would need more than just a taste.

TY, BD

sacksackover 18 years ago
cute, day brightening

and showing your great sense of humor!!

lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Sweet

High calorie erotica.....yummy

woodnymph_Owoodnymph_Oover 18 years ago
Now i have to drive to the store

Dammit! and there goes my diet too

delicious_mandelicious_manover 6 years ago

This is beautifully suggestive.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
SWEETER AND NEATER

taste not want not, TK U MLJ LV NV

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