by Honey123
*hopping in car.. driving to store..purchasing milkyway and its all your fault*
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I don't think I will ever look at caramel the same way, now if I could only get a taste of Honey.
Deeelishus. Looks even better on the screen. Well done Honey. xxxxx
Sticky and sweet? Yes, a wonderful combination indeed. Nice poem, Honey.
~lucky
Mmm...I always thought there was a reason I loved Milky Way over other types of candy bars. I really liked this, esp for a first time submission (I might have punctuated differently, but that's the kind of personal thing you have to decide for yourself.) Very evocative. <g>
...that sex and chocolate connection? Nice first (but better not be last) contribution. Not enough babe, gimme more. Maybe a popsicle poem next? ~~evil grin~~
Great poem. Making a mental note to pick up a Milky Way on the way home from work, give it to the mrs along with a link to this.
like all your stories and thoughts, absolutely the best and what's unsaid is so erotic. Can't wait for more.
Oh, to be
That candy bar
To feel your lips
againt me
You teeth
devour me...
Damn, Babe, Now you got me started. Good job Honey.
Great, soft, sensual, vivid....
I want to taste you, to share the moment.....
Great work babe. I'll never look at a Milky Way the same again.
Tastey poetry~ deliciously served and inticed my apetite. He he he good poem (~_*) Thanks
Very hot poem, though I think I would need more than just a taste.
TY, BD