All Comments on 'Sara's Undoing'

Great work. I really enjoyed this

I hope there is more from you soon.

@ anonymous I'm currently working on chapter 2 and 3 . I am glad you enjoyed my story.

Great beginning, the idea seems unique in its own way and well written. I think this will be good one. I'm going to have to favorite this author so not to miss the rest.

Please note that "waste" and "waist" are different words. I "no" you "know" this, but spellcheck can't help you be careful.

Yes, I'm aware of the difference between waste, waist, there, their, they're, are, our, no, know, weight, wait, ECT and so on. Please don't make comments about the grammar. I'm aware of the mistakes. I HATE GRAMMAR NAZI'S. This is my first book and I appreciate all of the comments and feed back on the story, or even the structure. I apologize if this offends anyone.

I think we all need a friend who will push us to do what we secretly want to do anyway. This is a lovely story, very exciting, and enjoyable.

Hot and fun chapter. Loved the theme, the setup and also the sex. The perfect chapter for an out and out good time