by CharmingVixen
I like the story so far. It's a good begginning. Ivory should seem a little more innocent and maybe a little tougher in my opinion though.
She's an escort, but is a virgin? How does that happen?
And if she was working as an escort, why did she spurn his initial offer?
And seriously - the word is shudder, not shutter. Par for the course with this piece of drivel.
Peace out