All Comments on 'Childhood Sensuality'

by ashkara

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Some very

nice images here.

And something for each sense.

I'd love to see it expanded a litte...to draw a clearer picture.

Good work

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
Very nice!

Cold pinpricks drilling

Through the layers of my skin.

I remember that feeling well.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Sometime a child's innocent pleasures can be a lesson to us all.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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