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the shark line is great
a shark falls asleep at my neck
I see speaker wires, proud and
black against apartment white walls
Hanging with
the band.
I had many a night like this also.
Love the " shark at the neck" line and also the " touch under short denim...pass it around"
There is a lazy camaraderie here that you capture very well.
As always you work makes me smile and think
Thank you
sigh
This brought back memories of days and people lost. ANd of a time and a place and a group and a moment when we were a little bit more than just us. Pass it around...
Liked
this posted elsewhere, read here it and enjoyed it again. Nice work.
"every one, a genius at midnight"
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