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English
Strange
what can i say - nice clashing three liners
cold
naked
stone
hot
naked
ash
Ooh, this I LIKE!
I know I'm a bit odd and morbid, but this poem made me smile clear through to the end:
take me where they know me best
they will know what to do
Beautiful
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
yep
of all your stuff today, this is the one that "got" me. esp the line with your mothers blood still sliding through your veins..this is one you outta enter into that emily dickenson poetry contest next year :) good work Seattle
That gave me goosebumps!!
Whoa!! Really great stuff!!
It's poems like this that really make you stop and think. That would make a great story too. Some really deep thoughts and images conjured up in so few words.
Fantastic job hon!! ;-)
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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