Home for the Summer

Good Story

Would love to hear a continuation!! Hot!!

thanks stef

boinggg

sexy much?

please continue, god that was some hot stuff

Unoriginal

This story is very typical of a hundred others. By the way, who on earth says "Fox" any more? Maybe this was written in the 1970s. The author might try "Babe' or "Hottie".

Sudden

There's no buildup to this, but sometimes that's the best thing, isn't it? I'd love to read more. It's a pretty familiar style, but that's no crime.

outragious awesum fucking , well done

enjoyed reading your story, worked 4 me, for those people who said [ old ,boring,] DO BETTER, let the rest of us who enjoy some-one elses fiction , read and be entertained bi the writers, kevin

Fantastic Story Please Continue it

THe story left us hanging let us know what happens next.

fox is hot

and thats coming from a woman who loves men in all their forms. if a guy can say something, no matter how "out of date" it is, and make it work, go for his. this was a hot story.

Mmm

Story went kind of fast but that didn't stop me from getting turned on! ;) Great job and I can't wait to read what other adventures David and Stephanie have.

hmmmmm

Unorginal? Familiar? Sounds VERY familiar. The dipshit comments I mean. Did the story excite? Well yes. Did you get hard or wet reading it? Hmmmm I suppose. Did you envision it was YOU fucking the sister or the sister fucking the brother?
Well? Of course you did! It was a HOT ride all the damn way fool, and you fucking KNOW it. Sarahhh calls you people trolls. Do us all a favor and crawl back under your favorite rock. FOOLS!

Nice

MORE MORE MORE!! I WANT MORE !

Premise is ok, but there is a lot of repetitive word usage that kind of kills the flow... That and constantly saying 'cunt' over and over :/