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knight this was a magnificent story and I read all 4 of them, but didn't want to comment until I caught the ending. I thought that you would end up having John dring Marcus cum out of Jamie's cunt. I wondered why she was mad with John for going out to have abeer and took that as an excuse to give Marcus another shot of cunt. I may be wrong but something as good as this needs a better closure. Did Jamie and John reconciled when came back? Did she kick him out for fucking someone else. Did he bring the cum stainpanties. So much more...................
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooooooooo, why did you do that to me. i really did enjoy this story though.
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Karma is usually a bitch! Be careful what you do, because it would be put in reverse and run over your ass....
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