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Personal Trainer Lust Ch. 01

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by Anonymous09/16/06

Really Nice Work

I could clearly see every detail of your story playing out in my mind, it was incredibly hot and sensuous. I've always enjoyed watching a woman masturbate; this story made me feel like I had a bird's eye view of the entire sweet sexy experience.

I really like the way that you described the blending of Amy and Rita's images in her mind, and the fact that your grammar and spelling were without reproach (something that many authors of erotic fiction cannot claim). This was wonderful work, and I hope to see many more of this amazing quality from you in the future.

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