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Nice Story
I liked the build up and the simple plot line. Introducing Doris at the last minute was a little cheesy. The story could have just ended with him falling asleep, fully satisfied.
well done!
I quite enjoyed this...a little bit different. I would have two comments...extend the beginning..build a little suspense/tension before getting to the bedroom. The second comment is that I quite enjoyed the little mention of the girlfriend at the end..dovetails quite nicely into what, I assume, will be a sequel??
Great Story
I very much enjoyed your story. So often it is difficult to find a spanking and sex story. Usually it's just spanking. Nice very nice. Introducing Doris at the end has left an opening for another story. Job Well Done!
You can spank me
It left me wanting to be spanked.
3 stars
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