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Evening Hillside

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by annaswirls08/30/04

Hay

I love how you brought the olympic spirit into this!

Some great images here, Remec. I could suggest some words that could be cut to leave the poem feeling more distilled and tight, but it is good as it stands :)

Thanks for playing!

no thermo

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by Lisa Denton08/30/04

Nice

I liked it Remec, it was good, Lisa.

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by doormouse08/30/04

Kewl!!

Wanna mow my lawns?

LOL good stuff hon!! ;-)

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by BlueskyBeauty08/31/04

a rhyme..

in time for the moon dance.

lovely!

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by Syndra Lynn09/11/04

this is lovely

nice work!

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by LeBroz01/13/08

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.



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