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Moon Of My Mothers

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by Anonymous

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by jd4george08/30/04

This is a great image:

"Forests beginning to preen
carpeting their floor
with nuts and fruit

fish hardly able to jump
for the flies buzzing over"

After this challenge dies down, please consider revisiting this image. There's something wonderful in there!

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by annaswirls08/30/04

wow

I love this poem. I don't have a favorites list, but this would go right on it.

You make up words. Me, speechless.
I love this poem!


no therm

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by *Catbabe*08/30/04

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This was spectacular Boo. A great idea that you executed with such grace and style.

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