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by jd4george08/30/04

Screw the ten line rule!

The compressed lines didn't work for me. The music in this piece deserves the visual reinforcement of different line breaks.

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by annaswirls08/30/04

um this is almost cheating lolol

I agree with jd, this is a good poem, but you sacrificed the flow for the constraints of the pre-requisites....

no spanking will be involved, I still like the poem lol

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by Maria239409/01/04

beautiful

Boo, as always, your sincerity and kindness shine through :)

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by Syndra Lynn09/11/04

Such a wonderful gift!

This is lovely, dear!

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by LeBroz07/01/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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