All Comments on 'Sweet Temptation'

Such a moving build-up - such a hurried conclusion. This could have been a classic.....

Lukas

Wow that was so sexy, romantic, sensual and hot, That is what every girl wants her first time with someone to be like. Reading that story almost ruins me for any guy, I will always have in my head the ultimate romantic love story with a modern twist given they met on the Internet.

What the last reader said about it being a classic hes right a modern classic.

Please keep writing I'm looking forward to more stories.

A completely turned on fan,

Jes1701

I agree with you Lukas, it was hurried. I vasilated a great deal about the genre of the story. In the end I decided to go with the romance instead of erotica route. I see now this story could have been far more.