All Comments on 'Palette'

...I wonder, having read your recent poems, what will happen when you again move beyond relying on colors. I mention this only as a warning about a rut we all fall into.

Great language, the colors placed just right...

Very visual and seductive read.

Excellent work

I especially loved the first 4 lines, think you might be able to jump to the red moon reflection line and then end it there....

enjoyed this!

thanks for playing`

wonderfully romantic and says alot for so few words..

I have moon poem envy