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My 2 cents....
The shaving part was great. You started with the 2 characters earth mother and cosmetic girl, give me details! Also make it a little longer by putting me in it ;)
-lv
Beautiful
that was such a sensuous story.. i'm sure you will think of something to repay her.. thanku xxx
Great begining, but
where's the ending, you work everything up and get it really going, and then end it, boom with no real outcome. I'd like you to go deper into the charecters if you could, thanks.
I would like to have seen more seduction
Not a bad story. I like the writing style. I just wish there was at least some effort at showing one woman seducing another instead of them just going at it as if it's something they do together every other weekend.
what a sweet story....
I liked the ending, it worked for me!
great
I thought that was a great illustration and picture. I could easily see the action and felt the excitement. The best part was sharing the bond. I look forward to reading more of your work. I wouldn't change a thing.
Wonderful
Very nice. My wife and I shared a similar experience, so this is a familiar story to me. I enjoyed reading it and will definately read more of your stories.
Hot read
It was intellectually stimulating at the same time as arousing, well done Logophile. I look forward to reading the rest of your works, and all works yet to come.
Ok, I have my next story...
I am so just sitting here remembering the first time I shaved a girl now, and the how and why and aftermath...damn! Thanks baby!
Playtime!
Fun to read, and even more fun to imagine the soft, sensual strokes of the razor...and the delicate skin newly revealed and tender...where was I? Great story. Thanks, LJ
;)
Very hot story. Don't change a thing.
One Word
DELICIOUS!
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