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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
:)

I like the image you present of the universe breathing, very effective :)

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
enjoyed this!

i thought this was a good poem, could maybe make it a bit more crisp by doing away with some words not needed...

but i'm not 1 to be able to talk..i do it all the time. lol

keep writing! ty!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...