All Comments on 'Maid Service'

by Simon_Magus

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don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Good basis for more....

Why wait for a few weeks? This story should be continued with the maid coming back again tomorrow, and the next day, and the next day, and so forth. Perhaps you could move her in with you and the two of you start a family together as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice start

Since you pointed out in the story it had been an year since she had been with anyone, that means she probably isn't on birth control. Which means that he could have impregnated her (I hope).

Maybe in part two she could find out that she is pregnant and things could play out from there?

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