All Comments on 'Mom & Son Vacation Together'

Much better than the usual mother-son drivel. Good details and moms feelings/observations were believable. You are a genius!

awesome... eagerly waiting for ur next submission...

I really liked this story, the pace/buildup was very well done. This story begs for a sequel. I'd love to see a part 2 where the mother and son's need for it to happen again overwhelmes them and they end up openly giving in to what they really want.

Enjoyed it very much. Thank you ,,,,and part 2?

Excellent first story, Jane, I hope you'll favor us with further chapters and have these two explore their forbidden passion.

Excellent first story, Jane, I hope you'll favor us with further chapters and have these two explore their forbidden passion.

great story ,like the others I to am looking to reading more stories from you,

it does not lay in how big a vagina or a penis is, or how many orgasms or how many penises a woman is "forced" to take into her body at one time

eroticism lies in the fact that it is a forbidden kind of "love" or "romance"; it has to do with the thoughts, feelings, and emotions behind it --- ie., the conflicting thoughts, emotions, and feelings

e.g., saying you have sex with your son 5 times a day, every position, and then you do it with your other two sons, etc., etc. there won't be much eroticism in it; it's just porno sex with family members

so, what makes something like this highly erotic is that it is precious, fleeting, conflicting ---- so,,, continue to write about those terrifying thoughts, those romantic thoughts about something so forbidden

so,,, don't stray into how big the son penise is; how you have orgies with his friends and how they all think you're just a "hot" babe; that will kill the story immediately, insofar as the quality as well as eroticism go

I love this and I rarely like incest -- very unusual and I can honestly say this is one of VERY few stories I've ever been totally convinced was actually written by a female.

would like to read more. maybe not necessarily part two but something original

this happened to me to when i was 20 years old taking my mom on vaction, we had twin beds in a hotel and in the middle of the nite she climbed in my bed and starting playing with me which lead to oral and straight sex , now we have sex every chance we get

Great story, perhaps in the next chapter (and I hope there will be many more) you might realize that your son has made you pregnant. He did cum inside of you with no protection...and that is the ultimate taboo...getting knocked up by your own son! I have dreams about that happening with my own mother.

this text was wonderful. i truly enjoyed each sentence. please submit a follow up to this great work. bravo!

Yeah +1 for the pregnacy idea. Would have made an nice ending to this part though.

I think this is a really terrific story: nicely paced, sensitive, realistic, original - and god, SO erotic. Nicely done!

Loved your story, please write more, and sure wish you were my mom!

i like it very much. It is true in the world

The nice slow buildup was exciting. Not your usual "Mon caught me masturbating and helped" story. Very good writing. I was excited by your story. Please write another. Sequel would be nice and I am sure we will enjoy anything you write. Thanks for writing the story. Would you like to come to my hotel room sometime? :-)

Your story was simply amazing. The soft beginning and "secretive" nature are incredibly erotic. I loved picturing you with your breasts forbiddenly exposed to your son's eyes and acting like nothing was happening.

Please continue this story as the description of true mother and son love is wildly perfect.

WRITE MORE!!!!

This story is so erotic and so tender and yet so naughty as well. I loved it and can't wait to read your other stories.

Beautiful story

MMMMMMMM What a story. Can see it clearly in my mind. MORE PLEASE!

Tonny

The erotic way you dealt with the story was incredible. Your gift with words are as those of an artist with a paint brush. PLEASE WRITE MORE! You are the type of writer that needs to be here. THANK YOU!

PLEASE write another story.

Told with wonderful understanding and sympathy. Couldn't stop reading it!

exquisite, please include pt.2

great!

Awesome story! I loved it... makes me want more!

This is one of the better i have ever read! more please:)

That was great !!! Plz do more.

Highly erotic. Especially because only thoughts were revealed without a word spoken during the most intimate contact. The conflicts between love, lust and the forbidden were well portrayed. The 'escape clause' you created by not having the act openly acknowledged added a most credible sense of realism.

When I was young my mother used to expose herself to me in her sleep. She didn't wear any panties and we slept in the same room although different beds but I ignored it. Strange though how a hairy pussy stirs my loins...if you were my mom I would have mounted you missionary style and made no pretense about it.

very nicely done! kiss, Anna

A very well written story that I completely lost myself in, without the abrupt change to unbelievable vulgarity that so often accompanies a story of this nature. Discreet and tactful. In my opinion, a perfect piece of erotica. Keep up the good work. Perhaps you will bless us with a second volume. Thanks for your hard work.

i too wish i had a mom like you!

A REALLY HOT STORY TOLD SO WELL. PLEASE WRITE MORE IN THIS STYLE

never knew anyone could construct n write erotica this well...hats off

keep creating magic wid ur words!!

jane, there are 1000s of stories in this site where anyone can read a new one everytime for the rest of their lives. but honestly, everytime i come here i search for a new story by you, get a bit dissappointed but carry on reading your old ones....over n over again...never ceases to excite me with the originality, true style, construction everythin.....you ARE the best in here....you are so gifted

gets me so hot everywhere, i donno

guess I'll keep commentin over n over again

dextra

Yes, as mentioned, you have an style that's fresh and exciting. Very few, if any, others arrive at the same level with your story telling.

Amazing, you are a very gifted witter. I have more to discuss if you like to contact me, i think i can help u write a story based on my life and its weird adventures.

I would like to have a mom like you .

HI janeb. what can i say. this has to be one exciting erotic

stories. i have had the pleasure of reading.

So very sexual but with love played out to the full.

excellent story great writing.

Mrs. B. continues the saga of her sexual involvement with her big good-looking son Josh. Mom's lust for her boy grows when she sees his fat dick as he sleeps. Then, when she deliberately shows her tits in the bathroom so that Josh sees them in a mirror, she notes that a big bulge develops between her son's legs. Here's something many sons are unaware of. Of course, they know that they're powerfully drawn to their mother's tits, her ass, and especially her cunt if they're lucky enough to catch a glimpse of it. What they DON'T realize is that most all Moms keep close tabs on what's happening in their boy's pants--whether his dick is showing a hefty bulge, getting hard, or already making a big tent under his fly. It's good news that more and more sons like Josh--probably thousands or more every year--are discovering that Mom is just as interested in their stiff dicks as they are in their mother's wet twat. Mother and son still have to be discreet, but the idiotic taboo against "incest" is fading fast. Now, as with Josh, a son can plow his mother's juicy cunt and happily blow his balls up his own birth canal--what a fucken rush!-- and both son and Mom can feel great about it!

I've read a couple of your stories. Wish you were my Mom.

It had the sense of realism that only comes from the heart.

You wrote at the beginning of the story that this was only a fantasy, why not make it come true. I made my fantasy come true. My son and I now share a deeper love than I ever thought possible. I gave your story a 75 I would have given it 100 if it were true. Make love to him, you may regret it, or you may find a love like ours.

Love, Paula

Jane,

Your sensitivity and lust/love for your boy even if in fantasy writings, match my actual experiences with my son.

I find great comfort and validation in your works.

Thank you so much!

Your friend,

Abbey

masterclass ...so arousing ...

great story wish she was my mom

Good story, similar to several fantasies I had as a teenager.

Iwish i also hav this type of opportunity to fuck mine

Nicely done. You build the story nicely and provide a good resolution. I could have used more body descriptions, but otherwise, an excellent write.

This is a wonderful story from a gifted writer and happy son-fucked mother. Ma'am, just keep spreading your legs for your boy and offering him the best thing any son can ever have--his own mother's cunt! All boys dream about it, some actually see it and get to finger it. You've let your son do what every son would LOVE to do--shove his big stiff prick up his own mother's twat and empty his big balls up the cunt that gave him birth! What a lucky motherfucker! The comments are almost as good as this account of hot motherfucking. There's emory, who's been happily sticking his young prick up his ma's fat puss for years, another lucky lad! Best of all, there's Paula and Abbey, loving caring mothers who give their young sons what every boy yearns for--unlimited access to the best twat in the whole fucken world, their own mother's. Ladies like these love their boy's big stiff dick as only a mother can, and their maternal cunts are hungry for the loads of warm potent semen their boy's got sloshing around in his hot young balls. Just think about it, a son's throbbing prick and his mother's wide open hungry gash waiting to be flooded by her boy's precious gift of rich creamy sperm. Is there anything more beautiful that life has to offer?

this deserves a sequel

beautifull story kept me in my seat and it felt like i was in the bed with you mom

keep it up

Why wouldn't either of them follow up, as would happen in real life? After all, they're both adults. He'd know that she'd realize that her pussy was saturated and leaking his cum in the morning, even if she HAD been asleep. (which he damned well knew she wasn't because she was aggressively fucking him back) Leaving it the way you did sort of takes away from the story, I think.

Loved it.Great story of true love between mother and son.

So well written, I could almost feel her skin and hear mom breathing. Another delight from JaneB

story is great.reminded me of my own similar experience at home.one night during a thunderstorm,mom came over to my bed and during night (accidentally) we got engaged in sex.

I love the story and want Tim and his mother to keep on going, but it being explicitly acknowledged, celebrated, and

flagrantly sensual when they got home, preferably resulting in a pregnancy or two where they live happily ever after raising their family together but that's MY fantasy.

You write the mother's hesitancy very well. It makes sense, it builds tension, and so forth. Some might see it as an empty gesture that delays the inevitable "good stuff", but see above. I think it works beautifully.

(Screed Alert!)

It irritates me how many women never fully acknowledge what they want and go through an elaborate fan dance and softshoe routine that creates needless frustration and emotional trauma/drama for both parties. It makes women look weak, unsure of themselves, and dare I say it, silly when I know that's not the case!

Still there's this perceived need to play off one's strengths or true desires too many women continue to do IRL and in fiction. You can say, just playing out the gender script, the audience (significant dude, family, friends) can't/won't handle it, whatever. Fuck that! Be yourself and find/be with folks who are OK with it.

This story had me so fucking aroused, I came twice before finishing the story. However, I was disapointed in the ending. At the point where they started making love to each other, acknowledgement with continued sex in the morning was the most likely conclusion. Thanks anyway for the great read. Reeb

I actually fantasized of a similar situation with my mom. Heck, I've even gotten a full mental picture of what she looks like nude from all the views I've gotten of her when we were at hotels and at home (the latter actually a few and most explicit views)... I always wonder if my mom thinks the same of me or even knows how I think of her...

Still, a great story...and hope your dreams come true...in the sense they help and not hurt you.

There was so much genuine feelings - doubts, wonder, passion, sensuality - that I almost find it hard to believe that this is just fantasy. I understand so many of the emotions that you described - which felt wonderful for me. Thank you

I grew up with a SUPER HOT step mom, and although she was the woman who raised me from pretty much a baby, she was still my step mom, and as I got older, I knew she was hot, and to this day I want to have sex with her.

I loved this story.

Wonderful eroticism, all the feelings of the deliciously taboo.

sounds like me and my mom, she had me when she was only 13 and we had some occurences like this and some of your other stories

it was fantastic you are such an amazing mom and your so seductive n i would also wish if had a mom like you i would have shown heaven for her by satisfying maximum anyways ur son is very very lucky after readin this my penis has become 90 degree til nw also its like dat oly

great comments! Does anyone doubt that janeB has taken--and continues to take--full advantage of her own boy's sturdy young prick? Like the mothers who've commented, this lady is in love with what her boy's got swinging between his legs, his stiff young dick and his balls that just keep churning out the rich creamy semen that makes a mother's cunt tingle like crazy. Besides the mothers, just look at all the boys who're wild for their mommy's twat. It's so damn natural, so close and intimate between a mother and her young son--she'll tease her boy about his "little pippy," and he'll smilingly protest, "My pippy ain't so little anymore, mom!" It sure ain't! Her boy's grown a real fat mommy-pleaser between his strong young legs, and his hot young balls are constantly on the edge of overflowing with his potent young sperm. Mom and her boy both know where all that young sperm of his is meant to go--way up that wonderful hole between his mother's legs where he came into the world from. A boy unloading his young balls up his own mother's twat--then mother and son watching his cream seep out of her mommy-hole--then he gets hard all over again and takes his mother and fucks the shit out of her--just beautiful!

I got myself turned on by wondering where the truth ended and fiction began.. I loved every word in it..

My natural blond mom slept in the nude and many times would come out of her room in the middle of the night to get a drink. She had a hairy blond pussy which looked angelic to me. I craved trying to see more of her pussy or getting a chance to fuck my sexy mom. I came up with a plan to moan like I was having a wet dream the next time she did her late night run to the kitchen. It worked as she heard me and came into my room. I had purposely left my sheet arranged where she could see my erect cock. It worked as I acted like I was dreaming about her and called out her name. Mom came over to my bed and lift the sheet the rest of the way off my cock.

Soon I felt her hands on my balls and then suddenly I felt Mom take my cock in her mouth. she soon realized I was awake but continued to deep throat my cock while she looked at me. I shot the biggest load of cum ever into Mom's warm mouth. When she tried to pull off slightly I held her head and told her to swallow of my load.

I moved in her bed and we had great sex every way imaginable. Turns out Mom goes wild over anal sex.

nice

Plz write second part for this beautiful story...

YOU WRITE A GREAT STORY, IT'S A LITTLE SHORT BUT A NICE READ. THIS STORY COULD USE A SECOND CHAPTER. SHES YOUNG, HES YOUNG ,THEY HAVE LOTS OF TIME TOGETHER. AND THERE AT HOME. YOU HAVE A FAN FROM NOW ON. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK PLEASE. LAROC OF AGES

i will have sex with you

Rot in hell. This is fucked up and I hope you fucking die.

we know its messed up thats why its amazing

The mother son incest is messed up but it's so goood and gets me turned on for sure

my son had a big cock from an early age .my hubby booked second honnymoon our son was to stay with his gran on the day of travel hubby took sick with chicken pox hubby said take john as a joke i agree john didnt want go as he didnt want sleep inbed with his mum after convincing him we went there was some raised eyebrow i told him to pretend to be my toyboy he soon got into it and like it soon we were making out in the bedroom we were motherson on the second day we got drunk we ended up nude in bed and having sex the rest of the two weeks was sex and more sex when we got home hubby ask if we had agood time we both reply together yes myson and i have sex when hubby not at home

I always stroke my cock to stories like this hoping it will happen between me and my sexy ass stepmother

Just posting to say that the anonymous guy who titled his comment "eroticism lies in "forbidden" took the words right out of my mouth! I feel EXACTLY the same way, which is why this story is, in my opinion, one of the few really good ones.

I went on a cruse with mum we had to shear a bed mum always dance with all the men i watch and sulk one night i could take it any more i but in the dance it was a slow one i held her close when the evening was over and we were in bed i cuddle up to her and she spooned into me i was getting hard mum was pushing on my cock i put my hand under her niti she had no panty on i release my cock in the crack of her ass her self my cock slip into her wet cunt all mum said it took you a whole week for you to do what i wanted mow we got make up foe lost time

Very hot. Wish that there had been a followup chapter two, though.

The possibility of it happening gets less and less with each passing day. I just dont know what to do to initiate it. I am quite good looking for my age.Anyone have suggestions? I have thought of preparing his favorite meal, champagne, and ...... just make the first move......

Love your stories, thank you.

I love this story, I have dreamt of doing something similar to this with my mother, but my father would always come into factor... What should I do?

LIKE IT. MY CUP OF TEA. I WISH MY MOM...

I only wish i had the guts to try that with my sons especially Wen We were younger

What a great story one of the best on the site. I have returned and read it many times and it never fails to send me into orgasmic highs while blowing my load in my hand. I wonder how many hotels with single beds have resulted in mommy letting her son crawl into bed with her. I am certain that a no vacancy sign has resulted in many sons getting to snuggle with their mothers. I love that in this story mom tries to disengage from her son by rolling on her side only to in reality offer her son her naked soft ass for him to grind his manhood into. I can only imagine how his cock must have been dripping precum as it made mommy's ass more and more slick and wet.. Eventually resistance fails and mom allows her sons rock hard cock into her well lubed pussy. After a very intense and enjoyable fuck her son finishes buy filling her unprotected womb with his potent seed exactly the way every son should.

mother and son seduction stories are always very erotic, whether or not they are fantasy or reality, romantic or lustful.

I would often watch my mother getting dressed for work or prepare for bed after a shower or bath while growing up, first as a very young teenager continuing until I was preparing for college. Each time I experienced seeing her either half dressed or just out of the shower in a towel, one around her body and another around her head, I would masturbate thinking of those images. As a young boy around 12 or 13, it didn't seem to bother her very much if I saw her in her bra and panties while dressing and putting on her stockings. As I got older, she became a little more modest and careful about me seeing her. However, she would often wear a short nightie while painting her toes while watching TV. My father was often there too watching TV, but it was still quite hot seeing her like that. My mother was rather short, 5'4" with a compact full figure and nice full breasts that were very noticeable whatever she wore. I often told her she was a nice looking mom, especially when she dressed up. At that time, women would often wear stockings with the seams in the back as it was quite natural. My mother worked in a fancy department store and was the cosmetic buyer, so she was always doing her face and had to look just right for work...she was also a blonde which made her even more attractive. She was also on her feet all day in heels and she'd always say how tired her feet were from wearing them all day. One night while she was preparing to do her toes, I asked if she wanted me to rub her feet. She immediately said, "of course, that would be so nice". After I rubbed her feet for some time, as she moaned and said how good it felt, I asked her if she wanted me to put

the nail polish on her toes. To my surprise she let me. Of course I had a hard on this whole time and had difficulty trying to hide it, both from my mother and father who was across the room reading the paper and watching the television. This became pretty much a regular ritual, at least once a week. I had a whole new experience to masturbate to thinking about my mother, rubbing her feet and applying polish to her toes. I even told her that she had sexy feet and she often wore open toe or strappy type high heels to work. I also began to notice that she would be more daring when dressing and undressing as I was seeing her almost naked at times. That was surely some great memories I had of my mother while growing up.

I have given you a 5. great story , hope 4 more.

Josh and I talked often on the phone the next few months. One day he told me he had quit his job, and was coming to stay with me while he looked for something in the area. I was worried about what could happen, but at the same time I was overcome with sexual excitement. The first night Josh was home, I wore the same gown I had worn at the motel to help with temping him to repeat our last encounter. We had only been in bed about a half hour when I heard Josh enter my room, and get under the covers with me. He began unbuttoning my gown completely, and opening it so other than the tops of my arms and shoulders, I was completely naked. He got on top of me and began to kiss me passionately, breathing heavily, I returned his kisses and our tongues mingled with each others. I felt the head of his cock against my pussy lips as he broke our lustful kiss and spoke. "I love you mom, your all I've thought about since our special night together." "I can't take it anymore, I've got to have you again." "I love you too Josh, and I want you. I need to feel your hard cock inside me." With that, Josh pushed into my wet pussy until I was filled completely. I couldn't help but start moaning as soon as he started moving inside my hungry vagina. "Without even realizing at first, while breathing heavily I began talking to my son. "Oh god Josh, I've missed you so much." "All I've been able to think about was having you between my legs again honey." "This is the best anyone has ever made me feel." We made love for the next several hours, and I counted eight orgasms, A one night record for me! I felt so content knowing my son and I would be starting a completely new relationship together.

I love your writing style and story's please please please do more

hope u continue and keep us up on it

I'd love to watch a real mother and son do this? Would anyone let me watch them fuck their son?

I'm a son and I've always fantasized about this happening this story gave me a fun time and I will read it again and I would love to talk about fantasies with you

Thanks for the read. That was a real sex story!!

Very hot story. Wish I had a hot mom I could act out the fantasy with.