All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

is rather ambiguous, but that makes this poem especially applicable to anyone's pain. You did a good job expresing yourself, but I think you could sharpen this a bit and make it better :)

...only can come when one doesn't rise above and move on..or try again.

you could squeeze a great deal out of this and sharpen up what you're trying to say.

just a thought..but a nice read ty!

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

This could be excellent but needs work.

Go back to the drawing board.

Where's your inspiration? You need to get some or a person to inspire you.

Liked the over all transition from one of doubt and dispair to hope of a new chance to live. Warm smiles nice.

It is like a rational discussion of pain and suffering

Or like a dissertation;

The words are there but they convey no feeling

And when reading's done the feeling is, "So what."

After a particularily harrowing time ~ Experiencing the joys of a new beginning.

It’s Ok to fail just as long as we learn from our mistakes. After all I’m not sure if this fits but, Rome wasn’t built in a day.