All Comments on 'Bought & Paid For Ch. 03'

Don't let her leave :(. Okay, you can write your story your way. As sad as it was, it was also fun to read. I feel so sorry for Risk though...

This story has me gripped. I get a real sense of Ivory and Risk and know they are meant to be together.. you must find a way. Please, another chapter soon!

I love your writting, you're great. Please another chapter

Risk is such and egoistical bastard. He need a woman like Ivory to tame him. Sweet, willing, ooh definitely all female. Should let him have a taste of heartbreak and Ivory would be that woman and also the woman to give him salvation. Yum Yum!

the actions and thoughts of this girl dont add up with her innocence.

I love that she gets her own back with him. I notice a lot of dominant alpha-male protagonists in your stories, and while the females tend to be strong and smart too, they lose all that when with the "hero" and submit to his personality. I like that Ivory doesn't, and I think it adds another layer to their relationship, making it easier to see why their attraction and love deepens.

O, that was hot---I guess is what I want to say. Thanks?

Perfect! Hot! One of the best stories I've read. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.

Thank you so much!