All Comments on 'A Father / Son Thing (WIP)'

and, hopefully, last!

good start you are on the right track

5* cause you got right to the action and kept it there. Stories don't have to be long if they conjure up forbidden fruit and make your reader hard. Great first story.

the memories of sucking my dads cock and then letting him shoot his semen all over my face ill always remember

After the first time with Dad I was hooked. we were together at least once a week. Dad never had to ask. I took care of his cock when necessary

Very hot story, don’t ever stop enjoying sucking off your father. I was very young the first time I sucked off my dad and I never stoped after that . We are actually closet lovers . Our hunting trips are spent in dirty hotels making love.

I hope you'll go back to this story someday - the sex is hot!

I liked this youre a good writer excellent opening and erotically charged I perfer it when you used Dad and father, daddy took me out of the fetish I wanted to jerk about. Write more

I loved the story. I always like father--son stories, but am often disappointed that the writer has the boy be 10 or 11 years old. So, I especially liked that you had the boy be at leas 18. I was also pleased that the father returned the blow job, suggested that it become a daily thing, and, now looked forward to sucking other men's cocks. The only part I didn't care for was the father calling his son a little bitch. I don't see any reason for sex to seem abusive. As you develop this further, you need to add physical descriptions and give us a build up of how they got started sucking each other's cocks. Thanks for your story.

I was also glad that you had this be a real father and son, rather than a stepfather, so many writers choose. I wish I could have had a sexual relationship with my father.

I really loved the fact that: you used the terms incestuous, semen, the cum that gave you life, etc. Those are the key elements what makes incest so meaningful and erotic. The only wish I had was that we could have read how the incestuous fellatio began.

HOT!

This was fantastic!!! I see its been years since you've submitted anything, but would love to see more from you!