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by Anonymous

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by jd4george09/02/04

LMAO!

That's it. LMAO!

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by flyguy6909/02/04

Cross my legs and cry!

Hilarious, Spike!

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by WickedEve09/02/04

fun fun fun

I'm mentioning it on the new poems thread.

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by Maria239409/03/04

hee hee

make me laugh and laugh two times, I like your poetry and love your rhymes, and ""corn mealed my alibi"", brought hysterical tears to my eyes ;)

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by 09/03/04

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Each stanza is very crafty. As with everyone else, thank you, you made me laugh.

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by twelveoone09/04/04

beatin'

po'e long fellow...
very good

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by Bill Dada02/03/06

So

So if I corn meal my alibi, I'll get the proper perspective? And a big laugh as well.

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