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A Perfect World

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/06/06

its really true

Your writing shows the underbelly of reality so to the point i'm a beliver

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by LeBroz12/09/06

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A prayer for change.

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by duddle14612/13/06

Past perfect...

This plaintive poem is the best reason to adopt a 'do unto others' Law. Now, our politicians will explain how it works. NOT!

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by Anonymous08/13/10

wow

your stories might be a bit repatitve, but your poetry is very true and i can tell u write from the heart, and that makes up for it being a little rough around the edges. so keep writing my brutha.

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