All Comments on 'An Unexpected Visitor'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Total Crap

Not worth reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great writing!

I really enjoyed your ability to craft this story. Its way more than a simple jerk off story. It is well written and paints great pictures throughout. Please do more!

CiaraSwallowsCiaraSwallowsover 6 years ago
want more

Don't let the anonymous ahole get you down. Easy to hide and be a hater, just cuz he prolly can't get it up anymore or he shot his load early. I think the story was hot af and could picture myself as her. Would love to hear more of the adventures of the sisters as they both seem to be my kind of girls. Nice work Ms

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Note: Regarding the picture. I posted it awhile back as a lark, no other reason. It was taken over 20 years ago by soon to be ex-husband number two. Since then, time and gravity have taken some toll. If you want to know my appearance today, use your imagination. The screen n...