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You REALLY need to work on your dialogue!!

Dear Anonymous comment: See, that's just it though, I didn't write this for the public, or you, or anybody else. This is a very personal story that I (a bass player, not an author) wrote for the love of my life Chelle, and we decided to share a part of our personal life with this site. Some other people love it, some don't, but we didn't make it for either of those people. So, the dialog is just fine FOR US, because it worked just fine for us. But, thank you for taking the time to post a comment, from a hidden and behind a wall while throwing rocks type of a way. LOL. How hard is it to create an account here?

- ALAN

Eeewww