All Comments on 'Release of John D'

...from start to finish...i like the structure and style, again a good example for those who write this type of run-poetry to look and examine the poet's control.

And hopefully he doesn't live in my neighborhood! Good job!

very netaly on this page. A good portrait with exactly the right tome.

This is a well balanced poem, with emotion and attitude to drive it home. Very well done, jd.

too controlled for me...but Tara is probably right.

: )

I like the style...and the bleakness..I just wanted a little more detail which probably would have spoiled it.

Great work as always

will set John free and then put his ass in jail again.

I like this my favorite of the three you posted. It might

be because it was the shortest or the most true.