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by KOLKORE12/31/07

big dipper of one own's mind

I could not know if this poet imagined the ambiguity which I found in this poem. While the flash lights may be pointing to the stars installation in the sky, a mirroring 'constellation' of dotted lights might have occurred to the observing poet right here upon earth as the connecting image of all those lights emanating from the kids' flash lights...

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by LeBroz06/22/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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