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by Anonymous

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by Miss Oatlash09/05/04

If only...

...pain didn't hurt so much. Nice work, doormouse. :)

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by Du Lac11/28/04

CRRREEEAAAKKK...

Doormouse..
creak... I hear the door opening to your soul. Loved it for the raw pain exposed. Life, reality and growing! Good work..
Du Lac

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by sack01/03/05

This has special significance...

Now that we have the Tsunami disaster....this could be a lament of one of the injured!

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by uSolitary196401/29/16

Great...

Well-written and beautiful..

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