All Comments on 'My First Lover'

pretty tamil girl

u have done pretty good job. keep ur stories cumming.

i gushed while reading this.

kathai padu super hot macchi

Dude, This story has so many mistakes about female anatomy that there is no chance in hell you are a female, kinda lame!

Better english and less bs?

It took a lot to keep reading because of the horrible syntax, but the drinking of the urine (piss to you) killed it for me. Drink a glass of chlorine bleach, which according to one sick American political leader will clear you of all that ails you.