All Comments on 'Awakenings Pt. 02'

Really a nice one waiting for next chapter

Needs a typo review.

eager for the next chapter, thank you

cANNOT WAIT FOR THE 3SOME

Hot looking for next chapter

So very hot. Aren't family sexual dynamics great? Mom is so hot.

Finishing this chapter I had the thought that either Mom only fucked her Dad or no one at all. It's up to her son to make her a complete woman.

Very well written and erotically compelling. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved it! Extremely hot. Five stars and a favorite point!!

i hope this isnt going to be a big flashback daddy daughter cum slut thing because thats going to really ruin it for me. i really didnt like how far you had her supposedly going with her dad to begin with. i really hope thats the end of that. none of that i find erotic or the fact that the adoptive son finds it arousing at all is beyond me. hopefully you get back on track between the son mother and aunt where the story should be focused on and not the gross grandparents.

More please and quickly!

Nicely written and edited. Far more erotic than most of the crude depictions found in LW.

But it blows a little that full on sex hasn't happened yet and he's not knocked up his Mom and/or Aunt by now. Enjoying the story so far though.

Here's hoping that happens....Thanks TA

Awesome story loving the slow build up keep writing this story

Since he's not really related, there's no reason he can't impregnate them both. Making them both his wives. I'm surprised that isn't why she adopted him in the fist place so that she could mold him into the perfect husband!

I'm loving how the story is progressing. Contrary to current opinion, situations like this don't develop overnight. This story should't either. Please continue asap.

I like how this is progressing. Not the typical, "Oh I don't think we should", as she is slipping his cock in.

Well done

Eaven better than the first chapter. Hope the next chapter is soon.

Great story, can't wait for more, simply "Hoooottttt!"

I really like your stories and can't wait for more.

Can't wait for the next episode to cum along

You are an awesome writer! My only beef - I'm a little annoyed that the kid forgave his mom so quickly. I'd have liked to see him punish her over a chapter or two by ghosting her and giving all his attention to Jen. Would have created an interesting dynamic. Not too late for this?

Can't wait for part 3!!!!!

becomes the present

This is one of the best mother/son series I’ve read on lit. It’s not the normal jilted wife falls in love with son. To me this is a story of the enjoyment of just sex without all the falling in Love. The added twist of the aunt being involved in the story sexual although neither know at this point just how much. I can’t wait to read part 3. 5*****’s

What an amazing read I could read this over and over again.

você e um ótimo escritor, essa serie foi a sua melhor... pena que você ainda não desenvolve outra dessa... estou ansioso

(8/20/2022) Brilliant!! A truly enjoyable read. Five stars and also on my favorites list.

Defo 5 stars and needs next part soonest

What a tease.... but I love it :) Maybe in the next chapter Will can do the deed with him mom and aunt, maybe they do it all together, what a blast that would be. Another five stars, thanks