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by Anonymous

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by tim452206/25/08

Absolutely Scrumptous!!

I've NEVER had sex like that and I'll bet few out there have, so I congratulate you on your find together and only HOPE that one day (soon) I too can experience a night like that with that kind of build up and completion. Actually I'm working on it, but it may not turn out THAT good, but there is hope.
..Tim

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by chilleywilley10/14/12

Well...

Not a story either. It needs some other emotions besides sex. There wasn't any character buildup. They talked for a year, but nothing mentioned. No interplay, not even very erotic in the stroke sense. The writing's good, but so far it isn't coming togeather. I'll read some of your later stuff.

Chilley

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