All Comments on 'Club Exit Ch. 03'

This was a great chapter - well worth the extra wait

I have so many questions/ideas on where the story line will go from here - so please keep the chapters coming as best as your time permits

Dylan will be a basket case by the time this is finally resolved

GP

lol I was wondering when you were going to comment! What I read/questions do you have? And I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

I have finally registered - thanks for accepting my inquiries - I do not expect answers except through the progression of the story line

Will anyone ever report Diego as missing? His name surfacing would help Dylan connect at least 2 disappearances together, happening within 2 days, and now there are 2 more close associates of Dylan also gone

Who will report Tim and Nate as missing? Will the 911 responders be at the house when John and Dylan return

Will Dylan's connection to John help prevent him falling victim to the "slow timed" trap set by Spence and his hired muscle

Will Spence's use of Tim's website help to solve this case

While Dylan "felt" a connection to Kyle's statue, how will he eventually realize it is Kyle himself and does not just resemble him? Of course that means realizing that Marcus has the power to transform people - not something obvious to him at this point

Would the "device" used by Spence be capable of reanimating Kyle, and the others turned by Marcus? If statues are being sold and moved elsewhere to make more room in the Club, how many young men have gone missing, in a town of what size, over what time period? Somehow the PD has not seen any pattern before this recent series?

I like the Tumblr picture version of this story line from Ch 2 that I stumbled across this morning

Yay for registering! Loving your inquiries btw, and I don't want to spoil the story... but there will be answers for what's been good on. I have the ending in my head and I'm pretty happy with it. It's just a matter of comment all the dots :D

This coming week will mark one year since I stumbled upon the original version of Chapter 2

Any guess on when Chapter 4 will be available - some of the other stories I have been following are on hiatus for some reason and the weather is heading for that time of the year when being outdoors is not going to be an option very often

I need a pick-me-up - thanks for "listening"

GP

Alas, chapter 4 has been a rough road. It’s there.... but not quite ready. Been struggling with the tone.... it took a very dark turn which is great for me as a writer, but I’m afraid it may alienate some readers. I’m currently fine tuning 4, and it’s quite long. Longer than the others.... btw happy read-iversary!

Thanks for the update on Ch 4's progress

Sorry it's taking more time than you'd prefer, but like Ch 2 it will be better if you take your time to get it right - not that I like it but I'm only the reader not the author

Nice tease with the comment "taking a dark turn" and I'm glad it will be longer - more info to digest and generate more questions in my mind

It may turn out to be a Christmas surprise in the end