All Comments on 'Making My Aunt Mine Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

F'ing horrible.

jtw0978jtw0978over 6 years ago

Dude continue this please don't leave us hanging

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Making my aunt mine.

Not a bad story, but poorly written. Lots of mistakes. My guess is you are an Indian national. Re-read your own writing next time, (10 times) before submitting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Totally jack-off story

I don't like total jack-off stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not your first language?

Guessing that English isn't your first language?

This isn't easy to read...

avengerfiveavengerfiveabout 6 years ago
Mixed

As others have said, the writing isn't the best.

But the premise is hot as hell, so 5 stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
your blackmail of your aunt

just be glad you are in a different country because if you were in the U.S.A you would be in jail your nothing but a thug rapist

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Same story as first chapter

Same exact tale as 1st . Some one can't do it right.

Booboo71Booboo71over 2 years ago

Damn fuck the hell out of Vivian fill her pussy and ass full of cum

get her beg you to fuck her

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great premise, but I found myself wanting to fix the writing.

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