All Comments on 'First and Lonesome Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Link to Part 1

https://www.literotica.com/s/first-and-lonesome-pt-01

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Promising beginning

I saw a very promising beginning with part one and now part two has me waiting with great anticipation to read the whole story! I can't wait for part three! A very interesting beginning so far, one that is filling with more mystery as each paragraph unfolds! I love the spine tingling moments and the pending promise of romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Another great chapter. This story is interesting, mysterious, and very erotic. I especially liked the description of the chocolate factory, and the tension near the end. Keep up the great work.

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ShannonBlackwaterShannonBlackwaterover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for reading and leaving a comment. I truly appreciate it. 😘

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