by ShannonBlackwater
I saw a very promising beginning with part one and now part two has me waiting with great anticipation to read the whole story! I can't wait for part three! A very interesting beginning so far, one that is filling with more mystery as each paragraph unfolds! I love the spine tingling moments and the pending promise of romance.
Another great chapter. This story is interesting, mysterious, and very erotic. I especially liked the description of the chocolate factory, and the tension near the end. Keep up the great work.
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