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by Tathagata09/05/04

I like

the whole idea of this.
when using this few words, though, you have to make every one count..
Try doing it one verse at a time and finding the Perfect word to describe it

do hips " arch" or do they " reach"?
you see?
I think there's a great poem here if you find just the right words...
: )

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by lostandfounder09/07/04

I like most of the poem but....

there is the end line "time lapses" that seems like such a letdown after all the glorious lovemaking. A reminder that nothing lasts forever I suppose....Good work Irish.

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