All Comments on 'The Christmas Curse'

by Todd172

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BBeinhartBBeinhartover 6 years ago
Hehehe! Very funny; very sexy

Great venture out of your loving wives ambit. About 10 stars, if it were up to me. Thanks for sharing.

dinkymacdinkymacover 6 years ago
Great story!

This was a fun story - thanks for sharing.

geek_writergeek_writerover 6 years ago
fun and sexy

loved it, need more stuff like this!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 6 years ago
Fun Story

Thanks. You definitely aren't in a rut!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great read

Holly needs to show up at the Shack.

Dick

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 6 years ago
Wonderful tale

And it's not even Christmas, but we all got the present of another view into your imagination.

Thank you so much for sharing once again.

5/5 (would be more if I could hack the system)

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
The Shack

I had the pleasure of reading this to edit it, and wish that more people could see it.

I like the comment about Holly showing up at the Shack!

So much at the Shack is so grim, maybe a lighter non-canon piece WOULD be fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Colleen Thomas did it better.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: "Colleen Thomas"

Would you care to tell us which story you're referring to? She has many.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Merry

Merry friggin Christmas...Early! Great fun story, maybe a future chapter on Joann as an Elf. As for Holly showing up at the Shack, no way! The Shack'ers are doing fine on their own. Love all your stories, hope they keep coming for years. Semper Fi.

Todd172Todd172over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the Feedback.

This was a lot of fun to write, and I hope it brought a bit of humor into your day.

As to Colleen Thomas; I feel honored to even be allowed to post on the same site as her stories. Losing her was - and still is - a tragedy; not only was she a wonderful writer, she was, by all accounts, someone I wish I'd had a chance to know.

Todd172

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
THIS STORY COULD GET YOU OUT OF ANY RUT

even one the size of our grand canyon. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
great read

This story was hilarious and I laughed a lot. I like a 3some now and then too.

newtinmplsnewtinmplsalmost 5 years ago
A couple of things

First, the last line really made the story

Second, I liked the true love subplot.

And of course 5 starts and loved it and go you go!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Long time first time

I’ve read close to 1100 stories on this site over the last 6 years and it’s the first time I’ve given any stars. 5 of them too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not in a rut!

I don’t know what you’ve fallen into, but, it definitely isn’t a rut. Love all your stories! Keep it up!

johsunjohsunabout 3 years ago

Loved "Jingle Girl" I'll never look at a female bell ringer at Christmas the same again. - You know, the ones in front of the HyVee (grocery store) with the red bucket. I wonder if Pere Noel has 'jingle boys' LOL.

Great story.

bhojobhojoalmost 3 years ago

I loved this one.... you really ought to write more of these with the explicit stuff since you do it so well and stretching horizons and other things is good for the soul and body :)

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusover 2 years ago

WOW! What a fun, imaginative, well written story!

Grant_GlapsvidhrsonGrant_Glapsvidhrsonover 2 years ago

I'll never view the Yuletide the same!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

" I'm in recruiting." ....perfect ending 😆😆😆

Judge6901Judge6901almost 2 years ago

Loved it🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the Best on the Board . By the way Can I borrow Holly on Christmas Day . 5 Stars

LeFrog08LeFrog08about 1 year ago

I’d forgotten about this one… this second read

was just as good. Thank you both…

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is the only, and I mean only, story that I really disliked; more specially the sex characters. Just no fun to read,

But, hey, NO one bats 1 thousand for every reader of every story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

5 Stars on a great story . I also want Holly for Christmas and all year long .

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Most Excellent!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was fun and light hearted.

Great read.

I'm sorry you've stopped writing.

Hopefully you'll get back into it.

NitpicNitpic5 months ago
If

If she locked her office door,how did Lillian take in the water?.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It was certainly not your styles. But after all, this

Literotica.cum! Happ!y Holidays!

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