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by Sass0frass

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wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyover 6 years ago
Is this an ending?!! To a non con double bang?!! ;))

So his sexual assault on his date,along with a buddy...taking mobile pictures of those makes her all gushy mushy over him?! ;))

After the double penetration,she returns beside him on the racetrack stands after fixing herself ,and sits beside him as though she's been through all this all her life?!;))Putting an arm around her, he asks if she loves camping,and she answers'yes' with a warmest smile?!!;)) Happy ending?! ;))

No wonder this loony author's lit bio is left overly vague!! ;)) we dont even know if its a man writing,or a woman!! ;)) The selected lit id is good though!! :))

Sass0frassSass0frassover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you wanderinggypsy

Thank you for your comment.

I have not filled out the profile page yet!

Navigating the site on a cellphone is giving me issues...

Racetrack stands alone, but it also follows up on my other story online date.

More insanity is to come as I explore the psychology of "female character".

(She's pretty f-ed up).

Thanks for reading and offering your feed back!

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyover 6 years ago
Stick to your great bod,hot and sexy females in quirkiest non cons formula!!:))everything will fall into place!! :))

Hey Sass:)) please do not work on female psychology in your stories!! ;)) coz seeing your female lead,seems you will find putting a mind or brain within them an impossible task!! ;))

Stick to your great bod hot and sexy females in quirkiest non cons formula!! ;)) things will go wonderfully!! ;))

Sass0frassSass0frassover 6 years agoAuthor
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Maybe, we will see. I am working on another that plays on fear.

I appriciate the feed back though.

We all love sexy bodies, but fantasy is more than that.

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