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by Anonymous03/17/08

Write more sordid little tales of pleasure

I enjoyed everything about this...especially Michael.

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by Pandragon05/05/08

Bravo!

Although this story doesn't fall within my personal realm of fantasy in so far as the two men having sex with each other, I loved the way it was written.

It's has just enough depth to make it feel "real," and yet there's not a single wasted word here. The story moves fast and fluidly right into a beautiful crescendo.

This is exactly the kind of gem I love to find here at literotica. I wouldn't change a thing.

Thank you Nyissa!

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by Matty_Walter07/02/08

Excellent!

Very nice - I loved it

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by Anonymous12/26/08

HOT

I would love to have been there to lick and suck up all that cum!!!!!!!!!!!

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